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Aerling
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Posts: 76 Joined: April 24th, 2014, 6:24:46 pm
Gender: Female
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by Aerling » February 6th, 2018, 6:52:01 am
Black Market description -
Alethin beck ons you closer and calmly places some of his wares in front of you.
Explore Taggelisk, End of Day
It' s dark when you return to the city...
orangesunrise
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Posts: 54 Joined: January 28th, 2018, 6:41:01 pm
Gender: Kraken
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by orangesunrise » February 18th, 2018, 8:10:58 pm
In the Os Raven description:
"Typically larger than their corax and yagaratsu progenitors, os ravens are named so for their lustrous white plumage."
Yatagarasu is spelled as "Yagaratsu".
Sanukuni
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Posts: 102 Joined: November 18th, 2017, 6:48:21 pm
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by Sanukuni » February 23rd, 2018, 2:53:07 pm
Beast page 438
Under the hatchling section, 'remai' instead of remain
Mysfytt
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Posts: 2173 Joined: April 2nd, 2013, 8:33:31 pm
Gender: Female
jillybean711
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Posts: 68 Joined: November 6th, 2012, 9:52:23 pm
Gender: Female
Location: Vulkhel Guard, Auridon
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by jillybean711 » March 29th, 2018, 11:48:04 pm
" The large feline turns to regard you, eyes, one green and one blue , full of knowledge."
For the Swirled Winged Cat. It should have "one green and one
yellow/amber/gold " as Swirled Winged Cats don't have a blue eye.
Aselis
" These companions are very friendly, and other animal tend to like them."
For the Aselis, it should say "animal
s "
" Nothing in the world can move a aselis against its will."
Should say "a
n "
SarahTheMythical
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Posts: 98 Joined: December 11th, 2017, 8:53:22 pm
Gender: Literally just six cats of varying gender identities sharing a suit of human skin
Location: Planet Saturn (Tacoma, Washington)
Enzona
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Posts: 19 Joined: April 25th, 2018, 3:38:26 pm
Gender: Female
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by Enzona » April 29th, 2018, 5:19:23 am
bestiary.php?page=493
"If not out of reach, a tantivus hatchling will will happily munch on a torch or even a lantern."
will 2x times
crowfur
MagiStream Donor
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Posts: 15 Joined: April 22nd, 2018, 6:02:02 pm
Gender: Female
Location: United States
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by crowfur » May 2nd, 2018, 8:12:12 pm
In the adult section of the Dark Bone Dragon, it says "breathe". It should be "breath".
"A unique trait of bone dragons is that they bear their young dead, and only the heat from a dragon's breathe can bring their young to life."
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Zidane
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Posts: 235 Joined: April 18th, 2018, 10:52:47 pm
Gender: Male
Location: Czech Republic, Europe, World
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by Zidane » May 12th, 2018, 12:19:09 pm
creature/8256360
The first sentence:
Young ankylocrocs are born very small, but wtihin a few short months are fully grown.
pepper333
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Posts: 163 Joined: April 15th, 2015, 11:42:37 pm
Gender: Female
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by pepper333 » May 17th, 2018, 1:49:47 pm
bestiary.php?page=213
In the adult description there is an out of place "="
"Their jackal=like heads follow every step of nearby people,"