English isn't my native language, but this sentence seems really odd to mewinding around the path down a path you've never traveled before
Missing a spacetelling you thisis a bad, bad idea
Missing spaces between characters and proper dashescobra--that must be Adela--slithers
"Ah ah, you wanted to come." he spreads
A dot instead of a comma
I believe, there were meant to be an interval between these lines.You consider your options for a moment and then decide to tell him you're interested and that you're staying.
“Excellent.” Alethin smiles, white teeth flashing.