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Icefire's entry(or entries.)

Post by Icefire1997 »

First up, a raven. Yes. A raven. Don't judge me! I love ravens!

Anyway......hope I did good!

Egg:
Two black wings are sticking out of a black, feathered egg.

Hatchling:
You watch as a small black bird hobble out of the remains of it's black egg. With its small blackish, grey wings and yellow eyes, the raven looks like a regular bird, if not, slightly bigger. Stretching its wings, it looks at you as if to say feed me! You give it some corn and watches it peck the corn up and swallowing it. You wince as its sharp beak accidentally comes in contact with your hand. Awkwardly, it hobbles around on its small legs and explores the area where it hatched. For days after, the raven has wandered around the Keep, slowly learning to fly and how to steal food. No matter how hard you try to hide or guard the corn and food, it always seems to trick its way through.

Adult:
With piercing amber eyes, your small raven hatchling has grown to a predator the size of a cat. Skilled in distractions and tricks, it is skilful in distracting a creature while you take its eggs. Quick and agile, the raven can now hunt by itself, but comes back to you, begging for corn as it did when it was a hatchling. With a sharp, curved beak, and cruel talons

General:
Often misunderstood as a symbol of tricksters, death and chaos, the raven is merely a predator with remarkable brains when it comes to tricks and pranks. Magis have used ravens for centuries to distract a creature, while grabbing an egg and running. Even though ravens can hunt for themselves, over the years of being kept as a Magi’s pet, ravens have developed a great fondness for corn.
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Re: Raven(Icefire's entry)

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Is it going to be a magic raven?
(ravens can naturally talk ... ^_^ )
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Hey, I think a raven is a good idea! This site needs some ravens!
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Knuckerbearer wrote:Hey, I think a raven is a good idea! This site needs some ravens!
Ya, but it's not a made up creature! :sweat: So I think that it's disqualified! O.o >.<
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Re: Raven(Icefire's entry)

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Neither is a Narwhal -- as long as Icefire fleshes out the mythical side of the creature, I think it'll be a fine entry.
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Re: Raven(Icefire's entry)

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virusq wrote:Neither is a Narwhal -- as long as Icefire fleshes out the mythical side of the creature, I think it'll be a fine entry.
& the same applies to Ibex & Koi.
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virusq wrote:Neither is a Narwhal -- as long as Icefire fleshes out the mythical side of the creature, I think it'll be a fine entry.
Hmm, toshe. :yarly:
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Re: Raven(Icefire's entry)

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Arimermaid wrote:
virusq wrote:Neither is a Narwhal -- as long as Icefire fleshes out the mythical side of the creature, I think it'll be a fine entry.
Hmm, toshe. :yarly:
I beleive it's "touche" :P
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Clockwork wrote:
Arimermaid wrote:
virusq wrote:Neither is a Narwhal -- as long as Icefire fleshes out the mythical side of the creature, I think it'll be a fine entry.
Hmm, toshe. :yarly:
I beleive it's "touche" :P
For crying out loud! I need spell check and sleep! :sweat:
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Re: Raven(Icefire's entry)

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*sigh*.. Don't we all? XD

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