Ok, well here's my story..
Chapter One.Alice.
It was cold.
I could feel the icey water nipping at my body, then instantaly I knew I would be gone soon. Away from this horrible pain, and suffering. After about three minutes I couldn't feel anything from my stomach and below, suddenly I felt myself being lifted out of the water.
He had sraight black hair that went a little past his ears and sad Yellow eyes. I watched those eyes until I felt the heavyness of my own. I hear his voice but couldn't figure out what he said, from what i heard it came along the lines: "You'll be safe, once we get there.." but I wasn't sure about it.
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It's a fail but I just felt like writing something..and i might continue..
Pure
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Re: Pure
I didn't know you would still write But I really like it. Reminds me of Shiver.
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Very excited. To tell you the truth your writing is great! May I ask, what is this book about?
❝ it's where
mydemons hide ❞
PLEASE! Do not call be Daunt, do not call me Less, call me Dauntless.
"What didn't kill me, never made me stronger at all."