Allright, after I'm finally done with the picture and the translation of the text (actually it's out of a german poem I sealed time ago.. luckily, I could translate it without changing the sense), here's my entry (Criticism's welcome ):
(I know it's a bit hard to read, I'll try to change it later)
(blue version):
http://imgbox.de/users/Tyriagris/valentine4.png
Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)
Re: Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)
Awww, it's so pretty. I love the words, and, for me at least, they really capture the feeling of friendship or love. Hope you win!
P.S. Ooh, ooh, and please don't change the font! That font fits the mood of the picture and poem very well!
P.S. Ooh, ooh, and please don't change the font! That font fits the mood of the picture and poem very well!
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Re: Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)
Thanks xD
well then I'll keep it the way it is now. And I'm glad you like the poem^^ Though I'm not quite sure if this really means a specific person (*coughs*) or not..
well then I'll keep it the way it is now. And I'm glad you like the poem^^ Though I'm not quite sure if this really means a specific person (*coughs*) or not..
Re: Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)
I guess I would like it even more if the font colors weren't so firey, but rather blueish. Yet it's still really great!
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hmm.. I tried it, but I think it's not that good..
Re: Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)
Yeah... The letters kinda blend in with the picture.
May be turn the colors into something more... Valentine-sy? Like, use reds, pinks, whites, and stuff?
May be turn the colors into something more... Valentine-sy? Like, use reds, pinks, whites, and stuff?
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hm.. how 'bout this?
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