Tales from Shoal Keep: Ch. 19 - Anemoné

[Vipersbite]

to many good stories in the place.

[sammythethief]

Raneth, thank you for your constructive crit! I appreciate it. As I go back and read through, I do need to vary up the structure of the sentences. It's a bad habit I had years ago, and it seems like a writing void of nearly four years hasn't changed that.

I'm obviously more rusty in writing than I thought, eh? Any suggestions or examples you might have for me? You can PM me if you don't want to post here.

But I am glad that, overall, you enjoy the story

[freakazoid]

Haha, sexy Nikko. *drools*
*stealz* Lyric: Oh, Yellowfang. Sometimes I wonder about you. *glares at her black Tienko*
Hush.

[SeaCrest]

A sect is a group of people who share a similar goal.

[freakazoid]

Ah, well, ignore me then. :3

[Phoenixwildfire]

I wonder if friendly sorcerers meet, do they have a 'spell swap'?

like 'oh, I know this great spell that lets you do 'this'
'oh, and this spell is handy in 'this' situation.

[sammythethief]

Oh... my stars and garters. THAT WOULD BE SO FUNNY.

[Phoenixwildfire]

lol something like-

Keisin: Yeah, so I found this great spell that turns ice into glass- very useful when building towers

Pheona *rolls eyes* this will take a while. Come on Rynu, let's go find something to eat.
Rynu: *facepalm* sorcerers. What do you SEE in that man?

[sammythethief]

Nikko: Really? Because with these weird temperature changes, my hideouts have melted and those pesky Hunters keep finding me....
Red: Wait! Pheona, Rynu! I'm coming with you guys!

[Phoenixwildfire]

o_o we should make an RP for these keep stories. They don't have to have relation to the stories at all- just use the character for fun and chuckles

Keisin: Oh ya, but you have to watch out for falling leaves or snow, it tends to look kind of odd when it's floating on top of something you can see through