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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby HiddenMystic » February 22nd, 2021, 6:21:28 pm

https://magistream.com/3-site-news/2270 ... aries.html

From the Mountain Pass Junction description...mountains is missing an "n"

Standing between the Silva Forest and the plains east to the mountais, the Mountain Pass Junction is
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby tempestsea » May 28th, 2021, 4:43:45 am

from Lore - Balance of the Ancient Sea

The mysterious Leviathan, the long-armed guardian of the sea, took the clouds of the heavens in his great broad fins and brought to the island its rivers. The Leviathan perched upon its serpentine tail and reached up to the heavens and weaved a sparkling strand of river from the ethereal wisps of cloud. The water of the river is fresh and good for man to drink. The mysterious Leviathan, wise and worldly, weaved a river for man.

Should be wove in both instances
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby HiddenMystic » June 1st, 2021, 10:05:59 pm

Delete this please...shoulda looked up the page :t-blush:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby phosphor111 » June 9th, 2021, 5:45:02 pm

https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=1036

This ability, however, cab be used to clear fields and small forests of the desgolos as well, as a lure with strong lingering magic is sure to draw in any desgolos within a few hundred yards.


I believe it's supposed to say "can" here instead of "cab." Also, this is just personal preference, but this description is a bit hard to read in general, so you might wanna read over it just in case.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby vividmirage » June 23rd, 2021, 7:10:48 pm

https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=512

In the “Adult” description, ‘explod’ should be ‘explode’ ^^


https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=825

In the “Egg” description, ‘lavender’ is misspelled as ‘lavendar.’

https://magistream.com/creature/13509425

'it's' should be 'its' in the "General" description
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby vividmirage » June 23rd, 2021, 8:00:09 pm

oops, found another lol:
https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=992

Adult description has 'bu,' which should be 'but,' and 'it it,' which should be 'it is.' 'feathery like' should be hyphenated ('feathery-like'), and it does not need a comma after like. In ‘now you’re now so sure,’ the second ‘now’ should be ‘not.’
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

Postby Saphira455 » September 11th, 2021, 2:50:44 pm

Checked the thread and didn't find this!

Albino Nandi Bear
In the Adult section:
Naturally very dangerous, predatory creatures, albino bears can be found on the borderlands of the Arkene or near The Keep if tame. Always hungry, these bears have obtained a bad reputation for eating flocks and cattle when there are no more food sources available. Local tribesmen believe them to be the incarnation of evil spirits and they are feared throughout the world. No one save for the magi will even attempt to hunt them down, though the magi do not feat them.

I believe this should be 'fear'!
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