Horizon's Entry ~ Tropical Griffin ~ Please Crit! ~ UPDATED!

Creatures · Post by **AquaFae** » September 16th, 2009, 12:50:32 am

This is full of win.

Creatures · September 16th, 2009, 12:55:12 am

you have lots of pets from differnt sites

Creatures · September 16th, 2009, 1:03:27 am

I like it, but perhaps you could draw the adult to show more of the head and body? The wings look great but they seem to just take up the whole sprite.

Creatures · Post by **Valden** » September 16th, 2009, 1:09:22 am

Stunning! Love it, though I too would like to see more of it's face.

This is my favorite entry so far. =D

Creatures · Post by **RinnyRoo** » September 16th, 2009, 1:12:51 am

My only thing with your GORGEOUS creation, is that the final stage just looks like a blur of color, and hard to see what it's supposed to be.

Creatures · September 16th, 2009, 1:15:50 am

I really like it! The only thing is that I would like the adult to be more of a front view. I want to see its pretty face!

Creatures · Post by **Horizon** » September 16th, 2009, 1:24:39 am

I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

Creatures · Post by **Valden** » September 16th, 2009, 1:33:42 am

Horizon wrote:I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

Well in that case, keep the male as is. :3

Creatures · Post by **AquaFae** » September 16th, 2009, 2:44:45 am

wolfsrain12 wrote:you have lots of pets from differnt sites

It's an addiction, really... There needs to be an anonymous club or a 12-step program for people like me...

Horizon wrote:I'm working on a variation, probably between male-female. The one I currently have would be the male, as a male macaw would be more likely to show off plumage rather than have the territorial stance (front view) I'm planning for the female.

That's a great idea! So far there have only been small differences between males and females. I'd like to see a creature with completely different sprites for each gender.

Creatures · Post by **Horizon** » September 16th, 2009, 4:37:06 am

Thanks People, I greatly appreciate the comments/crits.

UPDATED WITH NEW FEMALE POSE!!

MagiStream

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