MagiStream

yes you can still crit on art pieces ive done uωu

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WIP stages

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So far, so good. The cranium seems a little too large and vertical, and I think the feet could use a little work. (particularly the back left one) However, I think it's a great WIP.

Are the eye's supposed to go in oppistie directions, if so thats good. There are only four fingers but sometimes thats how people purposfully draw, so its good. And I don't see any wings.

whirlwind432 wrote:And I don't see any wings.

i dont blame you if you dont see the wings
they are supposed to look like branches or something

Platypoose wrote:So far, so good. The cranium seems a little too large and vertical, and I think the feet could use a little work. (particularly the back left one) However, I think it's a great WIP.

sorry for being dumb but what do you mean by "The cranium seems a little too large and vertical"? sorry umu

Cassowary wrote:Could I redline it?

sure!

Head - make the slope of the forehead more slanted, less vertical.
Legs - fixing some anatomy (less "bubbly", more streamlined, adjusting proportions).
Tail - thinner.
Neck - thicker, otherwise would not be able to support the head.

The top part of the head. The part where the brain goes. Sorry, I'm a bit of a science geek.

oops sorry i forgot about this thread sorry

ill post the improved image later when i finished it

i also did this earlier for practice haha

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i cant draw bird feet and shade feathers/fabric and i cant fix that tail since its done already uωu;;

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