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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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https://magistream.com/3-site-news/2270 ... aries.html

From the Mountain Pass Junction description...mountains is missing an "n"

Standing between the Silva Forest and the plains east to the mountais, the Mountain Pass Junction is
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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from Lore - Balance of the Ancient Sea

The mysterious Leviathan, the long-armed guardian of the sea, took the clouds of the heavens in his great broad fins and brought to the island its rivers. The Leviathan perched upon its serpentine tail and reached up to the heavens and weaved a sparkling strand of river from the ethereal wisps of cloud. The water of the river is fresh and good for man to drink. The mysterious Leviathan, wise and worldly, weaved a river for man.

Should be wove in both instances
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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Delete this please...shoulda looked up the page :t-blush:
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=1036
This ability, however, cab be used to clear fields and small forests of the desgolos as well, as a lure with strong lingering magic is sure to draw in any desgolos within a few hundred yards.
I believe it's supposed to say "can" here instead of "cab." Also, this is just personal preference, but this description is a bit hard to read in general, so you might wanna read over it just in case.
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=512

In the “Adult” description, ‘explod’ should be ‘explode’ ^^


https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=825

In the “Egg” description, ‘lavender’ is misspelled as ‘lavendar.’

https://magistream.com/creature/13509425

'it's' should be 'its' in the "General" description
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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oops, found another lol:
https://magistream.com/bestiary.php?page=992

Adult description has 'bu,' which should be 'but,' and 'it it,' which should be 'it is.' 'feathery like' should be hyphenated ('feathery-like'), and it does not need a comma after like. In ‘now you’re now so sure,’ the second ‘now’ should be ‘not.’
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Checked the thread and didn't find this!

Albino Nandi Bear
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Naturally very dangerous, predatory creatures, albino bears can be found on the borderlands of the Arkene or near The Keep if tame. Always hungry, these bears have obtained a bad reputation for eating flocks and cattle when there are no more food sources available. Local tribesmen believe them to be the incarnation of evil spirits and they are feared throughout the world. No one save for the magi will even attempt to hunt them down, though the magi do not feat them.
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not a typo, but a description error so thought posting here would be best anyway:

black savain egg description calls them pink, when they are actually black
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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In the quest 'Preservationist: The Symposium'
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"It seems to be mainly focused on plat life" should probably say "It seems to be mainly focused on plant life"
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Re: You made a typo, Magistream

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From the description of adult vasaeken dragons:
As soon as a vasaeken dragon has learned the power of flight, it is considered an adult. Fully grown vasaeken dragons are very concerned with constructing their homes, and most of their attention is put to searching for materials. Males in particular are obsessed with creating the perfect homes, because the more beautiful and elaborate their caves are, the more interested female dragons become. Shiny rocks, odd bits of jewelry, and bright cloths are the most coveted items. More adventurous males looking to impress a mate will sometimes go to extremes during courtship. They swoop down over the castle, snatching up a pumpkin, or anything that catches their attention. This causes a great deal of wind, and startles people and companions alike. Several people have taken on the habit of ducking inside nearby buildings whenever shadows pass overhead. Though they can fly just as well as other varieties of dragons, blank dragons rarely fly long distances. Adult vasaeken dragons are very attached to their forests, and are hesitant to leave their favorite perches on the largest trees. The most interesting thing about these companions are their magical powers. They differ from dragon to dragon, and are greatly varied based on their personalities. While most companions share the same powers, these dragons have endless skills. Particularly introverted dragons may be able to turn invisible, while compassionate ones are able to heal. These powers lie dormant until a hatchling has achieved flight, but one can speculate what their powers will be based on the dragon's preferences.
Technically, "blank" is spelled correctly. It is, however, probably not the word that belongs there.
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