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Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

Posted: February 24th, 2015, 6:47:05 pm
by Zeteri
Love, lilacs, lilies and more
all come to together to make love roar
along with a tree to make people sing
let this potion go
when it goes
the love will cease
and it will be no more



Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

Posted: February 26th, 2015, 10:38:15 pm
by Zeteri
Can someone please give me their opinion on my poem so I can maybe make it better

Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More

Posted: February 26th, 2015, 11:38:07 pm
by Silvrechan
I like it! I think it's fine as-is.