The Storm

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Re: The Storm

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This is my first time reading your work Raneth. I'm very impressed! It adds a whole new dimension to the Storm Steeds. Well done!
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Beautiful Story!

But i can't help but be reminded from the book
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Oh please continue! I love it! i think the ending does seem a tiny bit abrupt, so if you did write more it would be perfect. :D
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Re: The Storm

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This story is wonderful! It really drags you in and makes you want to read more. It is really fantastic!
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I enjoyed this so far.
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:woo: This... Is just beautiful. I really really hope you can continue this story :) The story just attracts the readers and make them hungry for more :D
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As always, I want more. :well:
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I really gotta get some storm and cinder steeds.
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Ah, it would really be awesome if you could continue this. :D
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Can't wait for you nex story.
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