I meant 'warmth of memory' because they have lost the comfort that memory brings. They forgot the Keep (home of the magi in this world, silly
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Finlandia wrote:Gonna make a couple of changes, you made some good points but one thing:
I meant 'warmth of memory' because they have lost the comfort that memory brings. They forgot the Keep (home of the magi in this world, silly) and thus (i love that word) were unable to draw comfort from the past, they went on with no respite from their suffering.
That means a lot coming from you!Niwer wrote:A simply beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much.
/sniffle.