Eljazo's Stuff! And Junk. New Work Up!

[Eljazo]

Hi! I'm Jazzy, you're favorite 11yo artist in the making! I'm here to share some of my works with you, so I can improve and get better.

K, well I'm pretty experienced in the world of spriting, As I've done it since I was 8... So, for about 3 years.
But all that was mostly recoloring and splicing Pokemon.
Never before have I tried to scratch a sprite. Well, I did once. And it sucked.
So I thought I'd have a go at making a MagiStream-like creature...

Its a Peacock! I was lazy and rushed it. Took about 20 minutes.
I think it turned out OK, But the hatchling is too small. And It's leg's look funny.
Anyways, feel free to comment/criticize. (C+C)


Ice dragon!... Or something. I was bored and made the egg, so I decided to extend its family. I rushed it... I'm not very patient. Turned out OK... but it's got so many anatomy mistakes.

When the glass-like egg hatched, Snow poured out. You watched in amazement as a small creature, No bigger than a large cat, pulls itself out into the world. It resembles a lizard, But you know It's a dragon. It's scale-less skin shines when the sun hits it. Three spikes protrude from it's back. You watch as it stretches it's legs and stares at you. Something seems odd... It's doesn't have wings. You gently touch its skin, Only to recoil as its so cold. Its wings are tucked up inside its skin, You can see that. And feel it. The small dragon snorts, And a cool breeze, visible in the sun, Shoots into the air. It looks around for the coolest place it can, and settles in the shade of a tree. This timid looking baby will soon grow scales, and It's wings will extend. The horns on it's head will grow bigger and it will pounce on the Ibex. But for now, It continues to pounce on the mice and butterflies.
C+C welcome.


Are you familiar with my friend Caramelldansen?
Made from scratch in MS paint. It took me about 2 hours, not including random moments when I got and scribbled stuff on it.
It turned out very, very good! Better than what I was expecting to be honest.
I just love the shiny effect on the hair!


Well, I was egg-locked.
And bored.
So I made an egg-locked smilie!

Feel free to use it.

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Just bored. So I made this one...

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As always, Feel free to use it.
C+C please~



Omg. Sketch wolfeh!

I think it turned out pretty good.
I know, I know, Its sketchy, But thats the whole point.
I'm smoothing it out as you read.

And, look! Heres Wolfie all nice and almost done!





I'll update every time I have some new work.
Thanks for visiting!

[Eljazo]

Updated with the ice dragon hatchling
Anyone gonna post?

[Clovermcrover]

I dont see anything wrong in my oppinan, but the Peacock Hatchling is cute
The Ice dragon hatchling is also adorable.

[Erika]

Updated with the ice dragon hatchling
Anyone gonna post?

love them both!

[Glow]

Awww, they're so cute! I really want to see the adults.

As for critique, the peacock looks a little flat.

[Eljazo]

Thanks everyone~

As for critique, the peacock looks a little flat.

Mmm, Its my first ever scratch sprite, so I'm still getting the hang of shading. I'll fix it up when I have the time.


I've tried to do the adults, But I rush them and they turn out bad. Heads too round, Bodies too small... Something I need to work on.

[Frostfoxen]

Lawl the egglocked smiley.

Gotta add that to my siggy; I'm almost always in that state! !

[Eljazo]

Thanks! Glad you like it.
I plan on making more smilies, Just thinking of what they should be like...

[Frostfoxen]

I do.

I had to tinyURL the links, so that I'd still have room for any new eggs I'll be getting.

Love it, though.

[helsinkivampiress]

The peacock and ice dragon hatchlings are adorable Love the egg locked smiley too, haha. Definitely very fitting for here