Love, lilacs, lilies and more
all come to together to make love roar
along with a tree to make people sing
let this potion go
when it goes
the love will cease
and it will be no more
Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More
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Zeteri
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Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More
Can someone please give me their opinion on my poem so I can maybe make it better
Clicks would be Appreciated
To Hatchling
Currently on a Hiatus. I get on to see messages and for Events.
Avatar and Gryphon art by Me
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To Hatchling
Currently on a Hiatus. I get on to see messages and for Events.
Avatar and Gryphon art by Me
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Silvrechan
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Re: Love, Lilacs, Lilies and More
I like it! I think it's fine as-is.
I'm no longer active on this site. I'm still around various places as theladysilvre. Thanks for the memories!