Sentōki: The Outcast (Story of a winged wolf)

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Re: Sentōki: The Outcast (Story of a winged wolf)

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[Thanks, cloudstar. And duskfall, suddenly you remind me of the book, Oliver Twist. XD Please sir, give me more. Heheheheh And as promised, here's another one! I'll probably post more tomorrow.

Ack, just realized I forgot to color code Sentōki's speech in the previous entry. XP]

"Why, young one, a Guardian is one who guards a specific place. I am a Guardian of the Mystical Lake, the place where all wolves go to receive their pack ranks once they are old enough. Eventually, the Elders at the Mystical Lake will decide if you have to join a pack, or remain a Guardian." the Guardian replied. "What's your name?" Sentōki asked, his sky-blue eyes looking up at the larger male with curiosity. The Guardian thought about the pup's question for a while, before replying carefully, "Well, as a Guardian, you don't really need a name. And as such, I've forgotten mine. But I seem to remember being called Ralde in the past." the wolf said.

"We've reached. Behold, the shrine of Mystical Lake!" Ralde said, setting Sentōki down. "This will be your home for the next few moons of your life, or at least until you've finished your training and you're old enough." Ralde told Sentōki. "Come. The Elders are waiting." Ralde said, padding into the shrine. Sentōki followed after the older wolf, and soon saw majestic, if somewhat elderly, wolves standing around. "Kashikoi, I have come with the winged pup. His wings haven't grown yet, but they will soon enough." Ralde told the leader of the elders. Sentōki looked at the wolf who Ralde was talking to, and almost fainted in shock at what he saw. The lead Elder's pelt was crissed-crossed with scars and he only had one ear left. Not only that, his pelt was a startling bright lavender and the Elder's eyes were a deep green. But perhaps the most shocking part was the Elder's large wings, folded across his sides, and his two tails, both tipped with a dark grey.

"You did well, Ralde. The pup will be trained here, and you will train him, since he knows you better than any of us." The lead elder said referring to the elders. "He seems little shocked for words, currently." the old wolf remarked, a slight smile showing on his scarred face. "You may call me Elder, as that's what everyone here calls me, young pup." The elder said. "Ralde, bring him to your den, he'll stay with you for now. Training for this young one starts tomorrow." Elder barked, "And I see he's growing those saber-fangs." Elder commented, before turning away and walking towards the lake.

"Come, Sentōki. Follow me." Ralde said, turning in the opposite direction of where the elder had gone. Ralde's tail hung down, twitching occasionally. Sentōki ran beside Ralde, his short legs making him slower than the older wolf. Whenthe two wolves had reached the back of a rocky outcrop, Ralde told Sentōki to follow behind him, while he checked the den. Ralde then padded forwards cautiously to the from of the rocky outcrop and gestured for Sentōki to go in. "The coast is clear." Ralde said, walking in casually. Sentōki followed, and right during that peaceful moment, snarls erupted from the depth of the cave, and Sentōki was pushed by an alarmed Ralde to a hidden corner. Sentōki peeked out, and saw Dilitiro and Ralde snapping at each other, wolves from the pack of Rocky Mountain surrounding the two. Sentōki gasped when Dilitiro darted forwards and buried his fangs in Ralde's throat, while Ralde struggled to get free from the death-hold. Pausing in his struggles for a moment, Ralde let out a loud howl of distress, before Dilirtiro tightened the hold, and the young guardian fell to the ground, blood pouring from the wound in his open throat. Dilitiro looked around wildly, his red eyes savage, as he searched for Sentōki. "Come out! You can't hide from me!" Dilitiro shouted, as he advanced on Sentōki's hiding spot.

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Sorry for this being a little late, I fell asleep while typing this out. XP]
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I love your story. I kind of followed cloudstar here. But it is really good
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Thanks, I'll continue to write more after today's exams.
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So great,so awesome it doesn't need to be 20% cooler because it is 100% already!!! :t-^_^:
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-Owl City Call me Tsuni, Tsuni Rekia. I am a winged snow leopard with silver fur, a crescent moon marking on my forehead, a heart shaped marking on my left cheek.

I, uh, really want ghost leopards...
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Ehh, don't flatter me, Aly. Everything can still improve.
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Sentōki trembled in fear. Wild thoughts were running through his mind. Is Ralde alright? Is he going to die? Sentōki wondered fearfully. He felt fangs sink into his scruff, and he wa about to cry out, when the gentle voice of Elder resounded in his mind. Do nit be afraid. The voice said. We'll be out in a while. Do not worry about Ralde, he'll be fine. Elder said through his thought transfer powers. When the two wolves were out safely, Elder placed Sentōki down, and spoke verbally, "We heard Ralde's howl from back at the shrine, and came to help him. The other guardian elders are surrounding the cave now. Watch." Elder said softly, Sentōki huddled between his paws. There was a bright flash of light as the guardians stormed the cave, and shrieks of horror and pain. Each shriek was cut off, one by one, and the guardians emerged, blood-splattered, and uninjured. Two of the largest guardians were supporting Ralde between them, as the young guardian staggered out. A lone wolf raced out of the cave, it's fur bloodied. The rest of the guardians raced after the wolf, and sprang upon the unfortunate wolf. Even at a distance, Sentōki could hear their fangs ripping into flesh as the wolf let out a cry of pain, which was cut off abruptly when a guardian clamped it's jaws around the wolf's neck. The guardians backed away from their kill and moved as one towards the elder.

"It was a massacre. With the casualties all being theirs and none being us. Ralde was being tortured when we stormed the cave." the female supporting Ralde reported. "Good. You did well. Is Dilitiro still alive?" Elder asked the pair, his eyes still fixed on the cave. "Dilitiro is dead as well." came the gruff voice of the male, "He was seen to have fallen, and blood was streaming out of him." the male continued. A silent command passed between Elder and the two wolves, and they turned and continued supporting Ralde between them to the shrine. "I'm sure you've seen what we're capable of, Sentōki. Do you still want to join our ranks?" Elder asked softly. Sentōki nodded. He was awestruck by the power and teamwork the guardians had shown when they killed the pack wolves. "I want to be a apart of your group!" Sentōki declared, his sky-blue eyes looking at Elder and the guardians with a newfound awe.

Elder nodded. "As you want. Your training starts tomorrow. Go and be with Ralde for now." Elder decided, padding off the the shrine, with all the guardians following. Sentōki himself also went, excitement threatening to make him burst, at the thought of himself being a guardian.

[Bad cliffhanger, heck, there isn't even a cliffhanger, but this'll have to do for today. Gotta go study.]
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MOre please give me more.
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I really enjoy this story, the dialog and the characters have such a natural, whats the word....
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[Sorry for the delay guys, I was busy studying here's more for you!]

When the wolves had reached the shrine, Sentōki bounded forwards and dashed straight to Ralde. He stood by the older wolf's side as the guardian beakers treated Ralde's wounds. "Are you okay?" he asked, his puppy voice still a little squeaky. Ralde turned his head when he heard Sentōki's voice and found himself looking into the sky-blue eyes of the pup. "I'm fine, young one. I'll probably recover within a week." Ralde said in a voice that was little more than a whisper. "Until I recover, I've arranged for Riku here to take over your training temporarily." Ralde said, his tail twitching weakly as he pointed a forepaw at a well-muscled, light brown male. "As Ralde has said, my name is Riku and I'll be starting off your training."Riku said, "I couldn't exactly refuse could I, brother?" the male chuckled.

Sentōki was surprised that wolves from the same litter were born with powers. However, he clearly could not hide his surprise as in the next moment, Riku barked. "Well, surprised are you? Yes, it's unusual for two wolves to be born with powers in the same litter, but here we are! That's why our powers compliment each other." Riku said. "Rest for today, little pup. Tomorrow, you're going to need all your energy." the light brown male said, lying down by his brother side. Sentōki was guided away by a pair of she-wolves and brought to a den in the shrine. Tired from the events of the day, Sentōki lay down in the nest that was in the middle of the den, and slept soundly.

A low growl sounded from the depths of a cave beside the mystical lake. Pawsteps could be heard within the cave, and the sound of fangs ripping through flesh broke through the silence of the night. A savage howl was heard, resounding throughout the territory of the guardians. The howl promised death.
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