MagiStream

Ok, well here's my story..

Chapter One.Alice.
It was cold.
I could feel the icey water nipping at my body, then instantaly I knew I would be gone soon. Away from this horrible pain, and suffering. After about three minutes I couldn't feel anything from my stomach and below, suddenly I felt myself being lifted out of the water.

He had sraight black hair that went a little past his ears and sad Yellow eyes. I watched those eyes until I felt the heavyness of my own. I hear his voice but couldn't figure out what he said, from what i heard it came along the lines: "You'll be safe, once we get there.." but I wasn't sure about it.
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It's a fail but I just felt like writing something..and i might continue..

I didn't know you would still write But I really like it. Reminds me of Shiver.

LOL! My favorite book series and Thank you..I've actually just gotten back to doing so..LOLgirl and I are writing a book

Very excited. To tell you the truth your writing is great! May I ask, what is this book about?

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AMAZING!!!!!
I loved that!!! That should have been the beginning of our book.

LOL! this is what I had written on the piece of paper I wouldn't show you..I honestly didn't think it was that good o-o

One thing, the character with black hair and yellow eyes is like Dylan ...If you see his pic.

But Dylan has a little white in his hair..does he not..o-o?

Yeah, and he also has a bit of purple.