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Postby Evilalice » April 3rd, 2012, 7:10 pm

Ok, well here's my story..


Chapter One
.Alice.

It was cold.
I could feel the icey water nipping at my body, then instantaly I knew I would be gone soon. Away from this horrible pain, and suffering. After about three minutes I couldn't feel anything from my stomach and below, suddenly I felt myself being lifted out of the water.

He had sraight black hair that went a little past his ears and sad Yellow eyes. I watched those eyes until I felt the heavyness of my own. I hear his voice but couldn't figure out what he said, from what i heard it came along the lines: "You'll be safe, once we get there.." but I wasn't sure about it.
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It's a fail but I just felt like writing something..and i might continue.. :yarly:
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Re: Pure

Postby FrostBurn » April 3rd, 2012, 7:19 pm

I didn't know you would still write :) But I really like it. Reminds me of Shiver.

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Re: Pure

Postby Evilalice » April 3rd, 2012, 7:25 pm

LOL! My favorite book series :t-swoon: and Thank you..I've actually just gotten back to doing so..LOLgirl and I are writing a book :t-X3:
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Re: Pure

Postby FrostBurn » April 3rd, 2012, 7:26 pm

Very excited. To tell you the truth your writing is great! May I ask, what is this book about?

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Re: Pure

Postby Evilalice » April 3rd, 2012, 7:26 pm

PM me :t-:)
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Re: Pure

Postby CherBearBrat » April 4th, 2012, 11:48 pm

AMAZING!!!!! :well:
I loved that!!! That should have been the beginning of our book.
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Re: Pure

Postby Evilalice » April 4th, 2012, 11:57 pm

LOL! this is what I had written on the piece of paper I wouldn't show you..I honestly didn't think it was that good o-o
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Re: Pure

Postby CherBearBrat » April 6th, 2012, 1:55 pm

One thing, the character with black hair and yellow eyes is like Dylan O.o...If you see his pic.
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Postby Evilalice » April 6th, 2012, 4:02 pm

But Dylan has a little white in his hair..does he not..o-o?
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Re: Pure

Postby CherBearBrat » April 6th, 2012, 4:03 pm

Yeah, and he also has a bit of purple. :|
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