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Postby Arospersonalguard » March 12th, 2012, 7:04:47 pm

\/spoiler]this is dead
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♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)

Postby Arospersonalguard » March 12th, 2012, 7:05:24 pm

Reserved
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♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)

Postby Arospersonalguard » March 12th, 2012, 7:05:36 pm

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I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)

Postby Arospersonalguard » March 12th, 2012, 7:05:48 pm

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I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)

Postby Arospersonalguard » April 11th, 2012, 4:10:15 pm

Anyone?
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby CrimsonRegret » April 11th, 2012, 4:45:59 pm

I LOVE THIS! <3 But I listened to the first chappie on youtube <3 I don't want to read the next chapters 'til I hears them though <3 ^.^ Because I like you reading them better, muarharhar >3
AquaStorm wrote:Hey Crimson, hey Kink! I'm LightningDragon's cousin... she says that Kink's an awesome writer, and that Crimson's...er... unique


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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby Arospersonalguard » April 11th, 2012, 6:04:49 pm

Shhhhhh don't tell them...
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♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby CrimsonRegret » April 11th, 2012, 6:31:25 pm

*covers mouth* I SORRY!! :DD
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby Arospersonalguard » April 12th, 2012, 8:00:05 am

I have 2 nd 3 recorded, im putting them up soon :3
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
♪ Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday ♪
♫ Annoying boys who hurt me ♫
♪ With all the stupid things they do-and-say ♪
♫ I can't even remember ♫
♪ What I was so upset for ♪
♫ Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way ♫
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby SeaCrest » April 16th, 2012, 12:40:42 am

Aww, so cute <3
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