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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby GingerFang » March 4th, 2012, 10:42:41 am

Please put more up! That last part was really good! :hooray:
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Ellie4740 » March 7th, 2012, 7:17:08 am

GingerFang wrote:Please put more up! That last part was really good! :hooray:
Glad you like eet.
Part 3-((Finally!!))

Thaurissam wondered why he was doing such odd things to continue.He flapped his powerful charcoal wings and rose into the air,his build dangling from the one thing keeping him off the ground.Me,sticking to the ground.Hilarious.He threw his voice across the island."EEEEECCCCCHHHHHOOO!"He had loved doing that since he first got his wings working.He heard his echo bounce back.

A small voice echoed back after Thaurissam's voice faded.It was impossible to interpret.

"Huh?",Thaurissam mumbled.He shot forward,where he heard the voice coming from.He landed on a patch of grass,where a small strange one pup was sitting.The pup had water coming from the corners of its eyes.It looked...odd...Sad,one might say.

Amber looked up.She immediately saw the dark-colored wolf towering above her.Wow.... ,she thought.
She reached out to touch it.If she befriended this wolf,she would have the ultimate bodyguard,and maybe even a ride to what the leaders of the colony DARED call a school.

Thaurissam moved his paw across the pup's face,wiping the water off.He saw the pup reach for him,as other pups lurked nearby.He saw one hold those things the adult ones hold,but that one looked strange.

Christopher raised his water gun to his shoulder.He immediately felt tiny under the large wolf's shadow.He walked to the side of the wolf..and saw...What he thought at first to be matted fur.Then,he learned.The hard way.

Thaurissam whipped his wings out and smacked the pup holding the thing that looked dangerous.He saw the pup stumble down,and turned around to face him.He snarled.The strange one pup crawled back.Thaurissam lifted his head up,and wagged his tail.

Amber lifted a sugar cookie out of her pocket.She held it out to the wolf,who she now knew as a winged wolf.

Thaurissam went out to eat the sugar cookie.He bit into it,and then devoured it.YUM.,he thought.

/endpart3

Oh and Thaurissam will regret what Amber put in that cookie.Let's just say its side effects are drowsiness.
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby EternalFox » March 13th, 2012, 2:24:05 pm

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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Ellie4740 » March 22nd, 2012, 5:29:34 pm

Part 4.

Thaurissam woke up with his head pounding.He surveyed the enclosed space before him.Bars.Cold stone.Nothing he could exploit.Just, bars.He let his fur lie down,and lunged at the bars,when he felt something restraining him to the back of the box.He turned around,and saw some cow skin with a shiny thing on it.It was attached to a metal rope,leading to one of the bars.He saw a small strange one paw reaching out for him,which he reached for,but it jerked back.He snarled.He sensed someone near.Who's there.I swear if you put me in here I will bite your ears off.He turned around,ignoring the pinch of the cow-skin thing around his neck.

Amber had just jerked her hand away from the wolf's reach.She had took the animal while it was sleeping.Put it in here with some..help.She leaned down in front of the cage."Hello.Wolf.I should really give you a name,shouldn't I?",she said and grinned.

Thaurissam heard the pup's noises.They sounded mocking.

Amber smiled.She opened the door and unlocked the shackles.Then she immediately reached for some chain,and tied it round the beast's neck.She smiled as it struggled to break free.She hopped onto the back of the wolf,grinning as it started to become paranoid.

Thaurissam looked around.His vision was obstructed by the muddy layer of grime on his eyes.He looked around,his mind starting to crack as he became the slave of the pup.He shook violently,trying to break free of the small strange one.

Amber smirked."Ain't getting anywhere now.",she said,her mind also getting carried away,but with the notion of power.

/endpart4

Thaurissam's current vitals:

Heartrate:Above average.
Blood pressure:Slightly above normal due to a winged wolf's increased calmness.
Mental Health:Rapidly declining.
Physical health:Slight tranquilizer overdose.
Hunger:Normal
Thirst:Parched
Age:3 years 8 months 15 days.
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Ellie4740 » April 10th, 2012, 1:47:43 pm

Thaurissam remembered something.A flashback to his pup-hood.Another pup,a black one,much smaller than him,trying to climb onto his back.He had jumped onto his front legs,and the pup had gone sailing across the clearing.

Amber looked at the wolf,who looked to be in deep thought.She furrowed her eyebrows and smacked the animal across the back.

Thaurissam's thought was cut short,but he had remembered.Something flashed across his mind.It was in his father's voice,back when he was young,trying to hunt.Pin it down.Wait until it dies.,the voice said.His mind cleared.He began to lean on his back legs,preparing to jump.

Amber held onto the rope around the winged wolf.She didn't understand why it was still with concentration.She began to worry,shadows of doubt closing in on her normal thoughts.She began to feel remorse when she was suddenly flung off the wolf.

Thaurissam snarled at the girl after he had flung her off of his back.He inched closer towards the child,and pinned it down,when a sense of mercy came over him.He waited until the girl was unconscious,and flew away,the rope still attached to his neck.He didn't even look back.
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Aly651 » April 18th, 2012, 5:35:03 pm

Great story you need to post much more and not forget about the thread before it is done.
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Ellie4740 » April 30th, 2012, 7:21:34 pm

Part 1 of chapter 6.

Finally continuing on his goal,Thaurissam soared farther and farther into the sky.He snarled at the tangle of rocks the stange ones lived near,and went for a flashing light in the distance.

He landed near a buzzing green object.He poked a paw at it.Suddenly,a vortex opened.He found himself being sucked through a hole,where his wings could open,but they would not fly.His world went black,then he found himself laying down.He perked his ears.He could hear chirping,and he opened his eyes. Before him was a rainbow world.

(I am happy with this half-chapter,how about you guyz :3)
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Aly651 » May 1st, 2012, 5:54:55 pm

Yay!!!! Rainbow World!!
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Ellie4740 » May 18th, 2012, 12:21:42 pm

Thaurissam saw another green,lush island.His head was pounding,but he could make out one sound: a chatter.He whipped around,to see many,many cats and wolves.Most of them were fooling around.Some orange and yellow wolves posed as to look like a bonfire.Some sat on the rock protuding from the cliff in front of him.He looked around again,and perked his ears.

"Join my pack!",every wolf was howling."Join my pride!",roared every lion. Thaurissam couldn't take in all the sounds.His world went dark.

He woke up again.Everything seemed alright.But everyone was talking about something."Well,first you go up the stairway at Lonely Cave,then you jump at the portal. I'll meet you there! Go to the portal! NO,this is not the place where it is. Just go to Lonely Cave!",everyone was screeching.

(Whoever guesses which game this half-chapter is based on gets to decide what Mossy's backstory was)
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

Postby Aly651 » May 24th, 2012, 2:07:34 pm

More story please! :t-:)
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