*Be with Me*-winged wolf story

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I shall be stalking. The story is very interesting and well-written. ^_^
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--Thaurissam's eyes narrowed, and one ear perked up. "I'm afraid I don't know what you're saying... There is next to nothing that can change its appearance where I'm from, let alone a group of them." His tail swished in frustration. "And no, I'm not hunting as of now. It's too long a story to explain; just... Tell me where the lion is!"

--The canid looked down, ears drooping and tail laying on the sandy ground in submission. "Nobody knows where he is, nobody's seen him in a few years..." He suddenly looked all around him, head tilting every which way. "G2g, bai."

--Thaurissam's wings fell to his side, raising one paw in confusion. "Wha-...!" He could only glance around him, trying to figure out where the wolf had went. He had just suddenly dissappeared, it seemed.

--Suddenly, a pink-and-blue wolf strode up to him, taking long leaps and seeming to rush through the air mid-flight. It had one ear down and the other in a normal position, with one eye closed and the other opened. Its tongue lolled out of its mouth. It sat down next to Thaurissam.

((Beware. Out there be cliffhangers.))
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Who wants more story? I do!
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--The cotton-candy colored wolf seemed to just sit there and do nothing, before a few clicks sounded out and a name revealed itself to Thaurissam's mind 3 times, voices overlapping. He silently wondered what this name was doing in his mind before suddenly, the wolf cried out loudly, "ACCCEPT MAI FRIEND REQUEST!"

--Bewildered, the charcoal wolf sat down, wings extended just enough to pull them forward as a shield. This creature was loud; would it attack him? Its large eyes and curled tail made it seem like a pup, which confused him to no end. Would a wingless, thin wolf like the one he assumed currently bombarding him with clicks and voices really boldly step up and ask him to ally?

--Moreover, SHOULD he accept this friend request? "Do you want to accept this friend request?", a voice called to him, silently questioning his mind. Oh, what the heck. Accept the friend request, Thaurissam thought to himself.

--Suddenly, the wolf intoned, in a solemn voice, "...B mai mayt pls," and walked closer to him, licking him on the cheek. Thaurissam got up, and with a flick of his tail, folded his large wings down and replied, "Sorry, I don't know what language you're speaking, but if you can't effectively communicate, I'll be on my way." And with that, he walked back into the tunnel leading to the island filled with stepping stones, as a chorus of "Oooooooooooooh!" and "Oh no he di'nt!" rang out across the sandy island.
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That was hilarious!
"Reality is a lovely place, but I wouldn't want to live there."
-Owl City Call me Tsuni, Tsuni Rekia. I am a winged snow leopard with silver fur, a crescent moon marking on my forehead, a heart shaped marking on my left cheek.

I, uh, really want ghost leopards...
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I'm back everybody! Also I will try to write better and more often.

Thaurissam woke up, his head pounding and mouth dry. He shook with every movement he took into a standing position, before looking up again. There, stood the visions of a fire-red Earth fox, a green cat, and a disproportionate, dull rose, small equine. He wondered if he was hallucinating, but the visions just seemed so real...

The fire-red fox opened its mouth to speak, revealing a full set of long canine fangs, and a voice unbefitting of something carrying its short stature. "I am Fourth Wall, or, as some people call me, The Fourth Wall. I'm a creator, an omnipotent being." Thaurissam started to shake as he backed away a bit, unsure of whether he should run or listen for knowledge on his quest.

"There is no need to run, Thaurissam." The fox's voice echoed through the cave, which Thaurissam realized he'd woken up in. It was earthy, low, but still unabashedly feminine. "I'm not here to hurt you, but rather tell you something. The lion you were told about is unavailable, and has been for years. He's not here, and I'm unsure of his current location, but I know he has good reason to be alone in his own quest."

"It may look like the air is clear and healthy, but be warned, you are not alone. Rocks are currently crushing your body, forcing your subconscious to summon me and help you." Thaurissam suddenly felt pressure on his spine, wings, and legs, and a sharp force stabbing at him. There was an ethereal quality to the force, but it felt real nonetheless. The fox faded out. "The next time you are endangered, I will find you, and you will not be alone. Goodbye, Thaurissam." And with that, fire and smoke billowed up.

Thaurissam was grounded again; he couldn't flap his dark, charcoal wings. It hurt to move his eyes. He knew what to do, though. He summoned up his strength, and flapped his wings. Nothing. The rocks shifted, but none fell. Again, he flailed his wings back and forth. The thumping and clinks of rocks falling and landing on the ground reached his ears. One more time, the smoke-grey wolf thought. So, he flapped his wings again. He started shaking, and the cave did too. Rocks tumbled and fell, and Thaurissam, knowing he couldn't fly, jumped from rock to rock, upward and out.

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Also, chances are, if I'm typing in bold, it's either OOC, or comes from a character that's really imprtant in the scheme of things. :derr: Also, have an awesome day!
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Revenge Of The Author: I'm Back!

Thaurissam looked around himself. His eyes darted from side to side as he panted. He realized that he was starving, and completely dehydrated. He was in that cave again. He flopped onto the ground from his hovering position, and smiled. At least he was safe.

He was safe...! He was safe and he could... He could find her! He got up, and let out a genuinely happy lupine laugh. But, now was the time to tend to his own needs. He got up and slowly, one paw after the other, shambled to the shoreline. He sniffed the water. It was unnaturally fresh and clear, for ocean water. He hesitantly lapped some up, and tasted the cool liquid on his tongue. He sped up, lapping up more and more water until he felt satisfied.

But then, he was still hungry. He tried to remember the place he started in... the rainbow world, with grass and cliffs and trees and... prey, their coppery crimson blood staining his teeth. And then, it came to him. He trotted to a tunnel, coming through into a larger, more open tunnel. He walked down that tunnel, before seeing another small opening. And beyond it, was said world. He walked in.

Thaurissam had once gotten lost for days, and when he first smelled prey again, he had lost control, beating a small rabbit into a pulp before devouring it. He now remembered that frantic, near-insane sensation calling, no, clawing at every inch of his mind. He could taste his future kill's meat on the air, could feel its soft, breakable flesh under his paws. Oh, how he wanted to eat it.

But now was not the time for rabid brutality. Now was the time for creeping along the ground, swift strokes of teeth over throat. He forced his manic hunger down, and sniffed the air again. Deer. Perhaps a fawn. This'd be quick and easy, and that was Thaurissam's favorite way to hunt. Quick, and easy. He followed the trail, sulking low to the ground and stalking closer and closer. And, there it was.

It was a pale brown, with a wound on its oddly-bent right leg. Thaurissam closed the distance between himself and the softly-bleating fawn, and leaned down before clamping his jaws around the small hapless creature' s throat. He closed his jaws further, further... Until the rush of blood met him. The fawn squealed, bleating loudly and desperately, kicking its unharmed legs, before slowly going still. Thaurissam tilted the fawn upwards, letting its blood fall into his mouth.

He tilted the fawn's now-still body to the ground, and began to wolf it down.


Not the only chapter I'll post today. :derr:
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Revenge Of The Author: I'm Back!

Thaurissam woke up, feeling satisfied. And there he was again, but this time he was in a cave. He could easily view the place he was before.

But now, he remembered his goal. He needed to find the Skie Islands... the small, rectangular rocks. He needed to scale those rocks. And then maybe he'd find them. He looked down... no way down but by flight, off the cliff he noticed he was on. He walked backwards, then ran forwards, and took off. As he glided through the air, slowly losing altitude, he began to think. This world had so much variety, yet so much population to each individual species...

It was almost as if the worlds converged on this island.

He kept gliding, and as his paws hit the ground he folded his wings and focused hard on bringing the home spell back. He needed to be back to the cave, where the rocks were easily accessible, and he needed to be there now.

And suddenly, he felt himself drop down.

The blackness was familiar and comforting, like an inky embrace around Thaurissam's body. There was another picture in front of him, a grey cat with something around its neck-

Thaurissam felt a warm, dusty surface underneath his paw pads. It was just like sand, but as his eyes got used to the bright daytime again, it solidified into stone. He looked below himself... it was a rock. A rock, in the middle of the air. It was the island, the one where if he looked high enough he saw a promising stone platform.

He felt an urge in his paws... like an itch, waiting to be scratched, and he jumped forward, lunging for another rock in front of him. And another, and another, and another.

Until he found himself faced with two choices. Circular levitating stones stared him in the face, guiding him down two paths... Left, or right?


Putting up "Left or Right" as a poll option to decide which path Thaurissam takes next! :yarly:
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Re: *Be with Me*-winged wolf story

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Can't wait for the next chapter!
"Reality is a lovely place, but I wouldn't want to live there."
-Owl City Call me Tsuni, Tsuni Rekia. I am a winged snow leopard with silver fur, a crescent moon marking on my forehead, a heart shaped marking on my left cheek.

I, uh, really want ghost leopards...
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