A Love for the Ages (comments welcome)

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Re: A Love for the Ages (comments welcome)

Postby ShenziSixaxis » September 4th, 2011, 7:05:36 am

I don't see a problem with the German language speaking thing, but I'm sitting on the toilet and it's 4am, so maybe I'm just missing it, or rather, it's making sense when it shouldn't.
I dunno.


I'm liking this so far. It's written well and the story and flow of it is all at a good pace. :D
Write/post moar or I'll fly over there and make you. :srs:
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Re: A Love for the Ages (comments welcome)

Postby Ktanaqui » September 4th, 2011, 12:45:09 pm

Wow... I look forward to reading this entire thing, Kitty. It's written extremely well, and the pace is enough to keep me hooked. I didn't even read the explanation at the top before reading the story - but I figured that this really was about you. I read the first post after reading the story. (I followed a link to Chapter 2 and had to go back to Chapter 1, so I didn't even see the OP.)

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Re: A Love for the Ages (comments welcome)

Postby Mathcat » September 4th, 2011, 7:01:14 pm

You have a talent for writing - I wish I could write half as well as you do. Don't let anyone - even yourself - convince you otherwise. I'm so glad this story survived, and that there was someone in your life who cared enough to rescue it. You have a knack for details and description, and for making your experiences interesting to read about. I can only imagine how much courage it must take to post something this autobiographical, especially since there are ample clues that things are only going to get worse.
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