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Those are all really good!


Lilianne wrote:excuse me, but that was my poem, thanks.
Hey wait that was your poem. Okay that was rude!!! D: Please never do that again.
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"You talk like a pope."
"Yeah? Well you sound like pudding. Deal with it."
". . ."
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hmmmm, that's an interesting poem. But if you add some more to it, then it will be great! ^_^ here is my newest one


Don't think about hurting them,
They didn't do anything,
Every time you hit them,
They grow more and more scared,
what do you think you are doing,
You'r the people that should be locked away,
Every drop of blood shed,
Should be your's... not there's.


This poem is for pit bulls, or really for any animals getting abused!
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XD XD XD It actully wasn't a poem. I just posted it for randomness. XD . I like you poem though. I hate dog fighting. :t-puppyeyes:
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oh okay! haha, but thanks. And so do I. I can't even think about it, or watch it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ah I hate it so much!
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Some people are so cruel. :(

The darkness of a cell.
Damp air clings to my clothes.
What possessed me to do this?
To purposefully get caught?
Crash!
A new visitor.
The jangling of keys fading.
Minutes melt into hours.
Hours into days, months, years.
Madness taking over,
until I have no control.

. . . It's odd. I know. I just wrote about being in jail. :t-sarcasm:
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thats a good one, but why the :t-sarcasm:
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Because I'm crazy. :t-bipolar: :t-pirate: :t-O_O: :t-sarcasm: :t-sick: .
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Oh okay, any more poems?
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Ooh me!

King's Hour

When dawn arises the king is born.
Rising up through a tower of truth,
He speaks to thou wisely,
Acknowledging faces in the crowd,
Remembering their titles,
While just looking out the window,
Watching the clouds move slowly with the wind.
When noon settles down the king is married,
Has a child who rises in a tower of justice.
When evening falls to darken the path,
The king passes away,
And dawn must come once again.
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