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Creatures · Post by **InsanityWolf** » August 29th, 2011, 5:01:37 pm

chapter 2 is done!

Creatures · Post by **moondragon** » August 29th, 2011, 6:03:38 pm

This is awesome fwuffy! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Creatures · Post by **InsanityWolf** » August 29th, 2011, 6:04:30 pm

thanks moon! do you have any critasisam? :3

Creatures · Post by **moondragon** » August 29th, 2011, 6:37:36 pm

I found a few grammar mistakes, but they're easily fixed. The only thing I would say is you introduced the characters really fast. Other than that, I like it.

Creatures · Post by **InsanityWolf** » August 29th, 2011, 6:38:54 pm

oh okay! I'll try to introduce the chariters more slowly.

Creatures · Post by **InsanityWolf** » August 30th, 2011, 4:50:29 pm

I finished chapter 3! go check out the origanol post to read it!

Creatures · Post by **moondragon** » August 30th, 2011, 9:03:49 pm

I love it fwuffy.

Creatures · Post by **InsanityWolf** » August 30th, 2011, 9:45:34 pm

thanks moon!

Creatures · September 2nd, 2011, 10:36:02 pm

Looks alot better fwuffy i give it a thumbs up

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Will you post who your favorite chariter is?

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