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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Five!]

Postby PumpkinPie » August 11th, 2011, 1:31:41 am

I think your prolouge is a tad too long, you should probably put it as the first chapter and put something else instead, maybe you could do Oak discussing the prophecy thing-a-ma-jig with someone?
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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Five!]

Postby moondragon » August 11th, 2011, 8:12:34 am

No, I like the prologue I understand what you mean, with it being like seven pages. But, its buit to capture a readers attention, and that's how long it ended up. I'd really love to get this published, and in order for that it has to be a decent length. However, I appreciate your suggestion.
And, I'll TRY to fix the poll :t-sweat: I dont know why its doing that...
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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Five!]

Postby Sliverwind » August 11th, 2011, 10:29:09 pm

i love your story!!! <3 Please write more ^_^
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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Five!]

Postby moondragon » August 12th, 2011, 3:45:01 pm

Thank you! <3 I know its rather short, but this is more of a filler chapter than anything. But, still, I hope you like it.


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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Six!]

Postby moondragon » August 13th, 2011, 12:32:53 am

Yay! Another chapter, and so soon? Well, if you like The Dark One's then I have no doubt that you'll like this chapter. A bit of a cliffy on the end though. Hehehe evil me. :evil: Hope you like it.


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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Seven!]

Postby DayHawk » August 13th, 2011, 1:56:02 am

AHH! THE SUSPENCE!
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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Seven!]

Postby moondragon » August 13th, 2011, 8:57:29 pm

Yup, lol. Again, I don't like how short this chapter is. I don't think this is going to end up as long as I intended it to be, but, I do like how its come out. Anyways, hope you like it. ^_^


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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Eight!]

Postby moondragon » August 16th, 2011, 12:59:19 pm

Bump :yarly:

I've started the next chapter.
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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Eight!]

Postby Sliverwind » August 16th, 2011, 3:39:37 pm

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Re: The Auras - A Kitsune Story [Posted Chapter Eight!]

Postby moondragon » August 17th, 2011, 10:36:42 pm

Newest chapter. I feel bad that its short, but its more a filler chapter. It can't have action all the time. But, things will happen soon. Don't worry. Anyways, I hope you like the chapter.
So do you think Lunea will live or die?

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