Sentōki: The Outcast (Story of a winged wolf)

Creatures · Post by **combusken88** » May 16th, 2012, 9:47:37 am

Aly651 wrote:yay!!! Other than Riku is about to get killed it is YAY!!!!

Thanks for the compliment! I'll be writing more tomorrow, since my exams ended last Friday. I've been a little busy with other MS stuff these last few days (you know, Magiversary critters, sonorus dragons, and the such).

Creatures · Post by **Aly651** » May 16th, 2012, 2:14:16 pm

Yay!I have been checking every day for a new update/chapter.I'm so excited

Creatures · Post by **combusken88** » May 25th, 2012, 6:41:21 pm

[Sorry for the (extremely) late post! I was...busy with...stuff...]

Dilitiro slowly tightened his jaws around Riku's neck, causing the other wolf to cry out in pain. "Surrunder the pup! Or this wolf will die." Dilitiri growled, tightening his jaws slightly as emphasis. The Guardians let out anxious murmurs and growls, and one shouted out, "How could an alpha do this?" Another shouted in response, "He's cruel! That's how!". "An ex-alpha!" Added another voice.

"Enough!" Elder shouted above the noise of the voices. "This has gone long enough! Dilitiro! Let Riku go. He has done nothing to you." Elder demanded. The old wolf's eyes were dull, and his fur was matted. "I will give myself as a sacrifice. Spare the pup." Elder said, sounding old and weary.

"Ha! You think an old geezer would be a suitable exchange? Well, perhaps your little ragtag bunch of wolves won't function if I kill their leader." Dilitiro sneered. The alpha slowly loosened his grip on Riku's throat, before letting go of the young male entirely. Dilitiro then stalked towards Elder, who stood still, eyes slowly following Dilitiro's movements. Dilitiro bared his fangs wide in a snarl, and leapt for the motionless old wolf.

A scream of pain filled the night air, and blood spurted from a gash in the throat of a wolf, while the frantic yelping of a young pup slowly faded to silence.

Creatures · Post by **SilverDragoness** » May 27th, 2012, 10:38:53 am

Oww ... poor Elder. But it's seriously interesting!

Creatures · Post by **combusken88** » June 5th, 2012, 11:38:18 am

"You fool! You made me miss my target! Now I'll have to finish you off too." Dilitiro snarled, placing a paw on the neck of a bleeding Ralde. The alpha's red eyes were glittering in fury, and his fangs were bared, and ready to rip through flesh.

"Heh, you already tried killing me once, and you failed. What makes you think you an kill me this time around?" Ralde sneered, his voice taunting the alpha. "What matters is that I managed to protect my leader, friends, and family. Nothing else." growled the injured wolf. "A wolf's pack means more to it than anything else, any sane wolf would agree. But you, Dilitiro, you are a dangerous, mad wolf who must be taken down. A wolf who cares less for his pack than a pile of carcasses, a wolf who is an unworthy alpha!" Ralde roared with all his strength.

The deadly red eyes of the alpha deepened, and Dilitiro's body grew tense with rage. "Unworthy eh? Let's see who's unworthy after I take your life!" snarled the alpha. Dilitiro plunged his fangs down and into the soft flesh of Ralde's throat, causing more blood to spurt out from the already bleeding wound. The alpha mercilessly tore his clamped fangs away from the weakened wolf's throat, ripping away a chunk of tender flesh, and causing the pained outcry from the wolf to be cut off forever.

"Ralde!!" Riku howled with grief. He watched helplessly as his own brother was killed by the ruthless Dilitiro, and he felt his grief turn into rage. "How could you..." he growled, "How could you kill an already helpless wolf?!" Riku cried, tears threatening to spill from his eyes.

The young Sentōki could only wail at the loss of his friend. Sentōki tried to run to attack the bloodthirsty alpha, but was held back by a couple of the other guardians. How could you?! HOW COULD YOU?!! the young wolf directed his thoughts straight at the alpha, Go away! he cried out mentally.

Dilitiro, for a moment, froze unnaturally. Returned around to the exit of the shrine, and growled, "This is enough of a warning for today. Hand over the pup to me next time, and I might let you live." the alpha growled, before walking off, into the shadows outside of the shrine.

[Okay! I know this is a epic fail, but I've been running out of ideas of what to write. Though, with this current chapter, I have a plan for the next already. Next chapter will be out by this weekend!]

Creatures · Post by **combusken88** » June 8th, 2012, 10:18:07 am

I finally decided to post the pics of the characters involved.

Spoiler

Sentōki

Hikarukaze aka Hikaru (will appear in the later part of the story)

These two are the only refs that I currently have. I'll post again with the refs of the other characters.

Creatures · Post by **Aly651** » June 20th, 2012, 12:19:12 am

do more

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