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Postby Mathcat » January 1st, 2011, 4:16:47 pm

Pulled for extensive reworking.
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Re: MagiStream Tales - Kate

Postby Weredrakka » January 2nd, 2011, 5:25:11 pm

Interesting... I like it!

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Re: MagiStream Tales - Kate

Postby Mathcat » January 29th, 2011, 3:58:03 pm

Discontinued.
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Re: MagiStream Tales - Kate

Postby Kestrad » January 29th, 2011, 4:11:40 pm

You write very well! Too many stories here involve lots of description dump, an overly forced plot, and borderline Mary-Sues, not to mention bad spelling and spacing which makes it impossible to read, while yours is intriguing and well-paced. Please keep updating. I think that here in the tea house, sometimes the best stories get the least attention.
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Re: MagiStream Tales - Kate

Postby ML1201 » January 30th, 2011, 12:41:57 pm

I like this so far! Though I have no idea why there were zombies in the first chapter. Maybe you'll get around to that eventually when Kate gets her memories back?
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