You write very well! Too many stories here involve lots of description dump, an overly forced plot, and borderline Mary-Sues, not to mention bad spelling and spacing which makes it impossible to read, while yours is intriguing and well-paced. Please keep updating. I think that here in the tea house, sometimes the best stories get the least attention.
Dealing with personal issues and a move Will complete trades and other obligations as soon as possibleKeep story
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