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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story

Posted: November 3rd, 2010, 9:04:14 pm
by Gravelleaf
i am sorry i havnt added any yet but i have been busy and had friend trouble so i will type more up just not now i am sorry to keep you waiting so long

Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story

Posted: November 29th, 2010, 6:48:42 pm
by Gravelleaf
again i am sorry but i will add as much more as i can tonight but i have not given up so dont worry

Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Posted: November 30th, 2010, 7:44:36 pm
by nightclaw
It's pretty good, but you should use correct grammar.

Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Posted: December 2nd, 2010, 4:53:38 pm
by Gravelleaf
i try but i am doing it on my own and i am 13 sure my moms a teacher but she is always busyi will fix it when i can sorry bought that

Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Posted: December 3rd, 2010, 5:39:17 pm
by Xanga
Its realy good i think you should keep going untill you have alot of chapters

Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Posted: February 14th, 2011, 7:33:50 pm
by Gravelleaf
ok i will make a deal and sorry i am so late but i will work on it in my free time but since my guinea pig just had babies and i have school and all sorts of things it will take time