WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

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should i continue posting more to this story?

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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story

Postby Gravelleaf » November 3rd, 2010, 9:04:14 pm

i am sorry i havnt added any yet but i have been busy and had friend trouble so i will type more up just not now i am sorry to keep you waiting so long
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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story

Postby Gravelleaf » November 29th, 2010, 7:48:42 pm

again i am sorry but i will add as much more as i can tonight but i have not given up so dont worry
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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Postby nightclaw » November 30th, 2010, 8:44:36 pm

It's pretty good, but you should use correct grammar.

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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Postby Gravelleaf » December 2nd, 2010, 5:53:38 pm

i try but i am doing it on my own and i am 13 sure my moms a teacher but she is always busyi will fix it when i can sorry bought that
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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Postby Xanga » December 3rd, 2010, 6:39:17 pm

Its realy good i think you should keep going untill you have alot of chapters
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Re: WARRIORS : Gravelleaf's story (added more finally sorry)

Postby Gravelleaf » February 14th, 2011, 8:33:50 pm

ok i will make a deal and sorry i am so late but i will work on it in my free time but since my guinea pig just had babies and i have school and all sorts of things it will take time
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