The Vita Sanctuary (reopened)

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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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Hanna's Dream
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Hanna closed her eyes, and fell alseep.....

Yakumo took hers paw in his and begun a slow waltz. It was the first time she met this charming Vita. He was handsome and refined, and here they were at the spring festivle together Dancing!

In time the eight paws moved in one, rythem over the meadows of spring as the mirades of flowers bloomed in all colors. It was like moving over a rainbow within the night. The world begun to spin as Hanna's heart quickened, her nose picking up the subtle hints of the newly budding flowers.

As the whole world blossomed with love, the pair danced onward into the night, and into the forests of summer, where the mosses covererd the rocks against a singing spring, the old magic ebbing against her thunderous heart. Was it just her or did he feel it too? Too afraid to speak the dance continued on.

Peacefuly the trees hung as Autumn turned, the shores subtly winding across the worn river stones. Every leaf fell in time with the breath of these two Vita so entwined in the dance. Yakumo whispererd "Dance with me".. and it was all she could do, holding onto this dream until it was no more.

As the Milky way danced across the skies, the comets light the heavens as the music moved like wounderous fireflies. Hanna danced in such a way that only a Vita like her could dance, with Yakumo. Together they passed through the mushroom rings, where the magic was bright and time stood still and his eyes were as deep as pools. He laughed as he spun her about and whispererd "Dance with me".. It seemed as if all he knew was this dance of time, space, magic and seasons. So she did.

She moved deep within a lair of stone, where the merfolk swam and he held Hanna tight as the colors of the dream blured together and then faded.

Hanna awoke her heart pounding, and her mind longing for this Vita who haunted her dream... Raising from her bed she pads off to find him wherever he might be, needing to know if it was to be true.
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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Firebird wrote:Hanna's Dream
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Hanna closed her eyes, and fell alseep.....

Yakumo took hers paw in his and begun a slow waltz. It was the first time she met this charming Vita. He was handsome and refined, and here they were at the spring festivle together Dancing!

In time the eight paws moved in one, rythem over the meadows of spring as the mirades of flowers bloomed in all colors. It was like moving over a rainbow within the night. The world begun to spin as Hanna's heart quickened, her nose picking up the subtle hints of the newly budding flowers.

As the whole world blossomed with love, the pair danced onward into the night, and into the forests of summer, where the mosses covererd the rocks against a singing spring, the old magic ebbing against her thunderous heart. Was it just her or did he feel it too? Too afraid to speak the dance continued on.

Peacefuly the trees hung as Autumn turned, the shores subtly winding across the worn river stones. Every leaf fell in time with the breath of these two Vita so entwined in the dance. Yakumo whispererd "Dance with me".. and it was all she could do, holding onto this dream until it was no more.

As the Milky way danced across the skies, the comets light the heavens as the music moved like wounderous fireflies. Hanna danced in such a way that only a Vita like her could dance, with Yakumo. Together they passed through the mushroom rings, where the magic was bright and time stood still and his eyes were as deep as pools. He laughed as he spun her about and whispererd "Dance with me".. It seemed as if all he knew was this dance of time, space, magic and seasons. So she did.

She moved deep within a lair of stone, where the merfolk swam and he held Hanna tight as the colors of the dream blured together and then faded.

Hanna awoke her heart pounding, and her mind longing for this Vita who haunted her dream... Raising from her bed she pads off to find him wherever he might be, needing to know if it was to be true.
Wow... I think that is all I can say. Wow...

I love how the seasons changed with the dance, and how vibrant the dream seemed to be. The story was very descriptive and enchanted, and I almost got lost in the words. This is a type of story I really like. ^_^

I can't wait to see more. Even if you think yours is bad, please post it. I love reading romances and stuff like this.
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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Hanna's Poem
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In the dark of the night
I feel Yakumo calling to me
my heart aches, for the moment... All time Stops.
If I were to only Listen,
Listen to the wind whisper
its calling to my soul.
Yakumo so far...A dream that can not be?
I shall try to Listen; as the stars twinkle
Every moment; Silent
in the agony of eternal empty space.
Longing to be by his side, and my heart struggles to be quiet.
hrmm not sure how it turned out. May try again soon
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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Firebird wrote:Hanna's Poem
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In the dark of the night
I feel Yakumo calling to me
my heart aches, for the moment... All time Stops.
If I were to only Listen,
Listen to the wind whisper
its calling to my soul.
Yakumo so far...A dream that can not be?
I shall try to Listen; as the stars twinkle
Every moment; Silent
in the agony of eternal empty space.
Longing to be by his side, and my heart struggles to be quiet.
hrmm not sure how it turned out. May try again soon
Oooh... I really like this one too. How sweet, the heartache for one that you do not know. <3

I just got a really good title for a story. I don't care if you guys steal it or not, though. "A Voice and Nothing Else".
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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If anyone has some Vita hatchlings they want to use with my Vita purr-ple, Feel Free! But, they have to girls!
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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A couple favored titles of mine are;
  • A Voice and Nothing Else
  • Fading Sunset
  • When the World Ends
  • Only For You
  • When My Heart Mends
  • Heart-breaker
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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I hope you guys are writing some good ones, because so far only Firebird has posted. :P

@WolfSpeaker:
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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@Star well they have til the 19th ... dont push them too hard! :P Maybe i get to win all the prizes if no one else enters! muhahaha. We know they are entering tho... just wait, the entries are going to blow mine out of the water :)
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Re: The Vita Sanctuary (OPEN)

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Here ish MAH entry. :srs:

A Season's Fading Sunset
Prologue
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A young, exuberant, female Vita padded along a stream, sniffling and coughing. She was sick, as usual. She felt the warm, beating sun melt into her purple pelt, as she looked over the stream and at Winterland. She lived in Summerland. Love between the two was forbidden. She caught her eye on another young Enfermen. It was love at first sight as the other Vita caught her gaze and locked his into her's.
Chapter 1
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The purple Vita was in a twist. Lilly was her very name. She blushed as the Winterland resident waved. She shook her head. Don't. Said a voice in her head. It's against the code. She narrowed her eyes and dipped her paw into the crystal clear water, wading into the shallows. Lilly went deeper and deeper into the water until she was in the middle. The other Vita did the exact same thing, at the exact same time. And his name, you ask? Yakumo.
~2 weeks later...~

Chapter 2
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Purring, Lilly splashed Yakumo. They were at Summerland, where Yakumo wasn't used to the heat, so on their dates here, they played in the water. Lilly's little sister, Forrest, was kind enough to keep the relationship a secret and keep watch while they had their dates. Anyway, one day, as the two Vitas were enjoying their days, they were caught. By the worst of all. Seasonland Police.
Chapter 3
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Weeping, Lilly sat in Summmerland's jail in a very depressed and blue mood. She missed her beloved Yakumo! Oh, she missed him so, so much! She looked around her, spotting a small hole with her sharp green eyes. She dug there each and every day, hoping with much desperation that soon she could get out.

~Meanwhile...~

Yakumo sat by the river, licking his paw with a sad frown. He let his eyes wander, finally landing where his girlfriend was sitting in jail. He narrowed his eyes in fury. He burst over the river, watching for police. He arrived at the jail, where a sleeping guard Vita lay, snoring like thunder. Yakumo held in a snicker and pulled open Lilly's cage. Lilly nearly let out a cry of extreme joy, but decided against it for it would wake up the guard. The pair ran out and off into the sinking sun.
~1 year later...~

Chapter 4
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Yakumo looked at his mate and purred. Here, where they had made their home, it was cool, yet warm, so the climate was just perfect for the two Vitas. Lilly's belly was swollen full with young and new Vitas. She let out a cry as the first pain hit her...

~Fades to black while she has kits~

Purring loudly, Lilly licked the lively, newborn Vita kits. "Sunshine, and Auty." She named the kits. The kit named Auty had a pelt with colors of dead leaves, fallen to the ground and Sunshine had the brightest, loveliest golden pelt. Here, there was no such thing as Spring or Fall... Now, there was. Auty was the symbol of Fall and Autumn while Sunshine, you guessed it, symbolized Spring. From this day on, this forbidden family grew to many generations and eventually, became rulers of the, now four, lands; Winterland, Springland, Summerland, then, last but not least, Fallland.
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