Ty's valentines surprsie (let's see if you can read it xD)

Creatures · Post by **Tyriagris** » February 11th, 2010, 8:48:25 am

Allright, after I'm finally done with the picture and the translation of the text (actually it's out of a german poem I sealed time ago.. luckily, I could translate it without changing the sense), here's my entry (Criticism's welcome

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(I know it's a bit hard to read, I'll try to change it later)

(blue version):
http://imgbox.de/users/Tyriagris/valentine4.png

Creatures · Post by **DI2k** » February 11th, 2010, 10:22:04 am

Awww, it's so pretty. I love the words, and, for me at least, they really capture the feeling of friendship or love. Hope you win!

P.S. Ooh, ooh, and please don't change the font! That font fits the mood of the picture and poem very well!

Creatures · Post by **blackunia** » February 11th, 2010, 10:25:20 am

I really like the picture! And the poem is really touching, very nice...

Creatures · Post by **Anette** » February 11th, 2010, 11:01:37 am

Aww, it's so cute!

Creatures · Post by **Tyriagris** » February 11th, 2010, 1:59:11 pm

Thanks xD
well then I'll keep it the way it is now. And I'm glad you like the poem^^ Though I'm not quite sure if this really means a specific person (*coughs*) or not..

Creatures · Post by **blackunia** » February 11th, 2010, 2:37:03 pm

I guess I would like it even more if the font colors weren't so firey, but rather blueish. Yet it's still really great!

Creatures · Post by **Tyriagris** » February 11th, 2010, 3:03:46 pm

hmm.. I tried it, but I think it's not that good..

Creatures · Post by **DI2k** » February 11th, 2010, 3:12:46 pm

Yeah... The letters kinda blend in with the picture.
May be turn the colors into something more... Valentine-sy? Like, use reds, pinks, whites, and stuff?

Creatures · Post by **Tyriagris** » February 11th, 2010, 3:35:02 pm

hm.. how 'bout this?

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Creatures · February 11th, 2010, 3:39:45 pm

I think the first one is best imo

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