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Critique?

Postby majette » July 4th, 2012, 4:09:42 pm

Hey, I enjoy drawing, and I was wondering if people could give me advice on how to improve.

Here are 3 pieces that I've published online...

http://www.sheezyart.com/art/view/2485015/ This one was hand-drawn and digitally colored. I'm rather pleased.

http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2451885/ Completely hand-drawn, but I upped the contrast on the computer.

http://sheezyart.com/art/view/2432678/ This is a character for an RP with friends. It was fun to do the tattoos.
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Re: Critique?

Postby TheReaper » July 4th, 2012, 5:55:23 pm

Whoa, evil.

Like them. The last and first one muct have taken you forever with those complicated designs and patterns!
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Re: Critique?

Postby majette » July 9th, 2012, 4:23:13 pm

Eh. The first one took about 3 days. The last one took under a day.
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Re: Critique?

Postby MoonlitNyx » July 13th, 2012, 7:12:55 pm

They're really good! Definitely work on the anatomy, like feet don't turn to the side like that when you're standing, and work on how clothes wrinkle and curve on the body and shading. If you work on those thing's you'll be remarkable. ^^
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Re: Critique?

Postby majette » July 15th, 2012, 11:39:02 am

Thank you. Since I drew the second and third ones, I've gotten a lot better at those. I'm still working on it, but I'm starting to be able to draw feet at different angles, and I'm incorporating wrinkles. But yes, thank you very much.
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