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Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:37:26 pm

This is my art. I often don't notice something is wrong or I know something is wrong but I don't know why or how to fix it. So, I would love critique, especially on drawings and sprites. I also just like knowing where I can improve. :]
Digital Art is in the second post.

Traditional

Drawings

Apple:

Flowers:

Kitty:

Rubber Duck:

Fruit Bowl:

Candlestick:

Red Panda:

Flowers Sketch:

Candy:

Another Rubber Duck:

Cartoony Octopus and Blue-ringed Octopus:

Bunny:

Atramentum:

Potato:

Rose-ringed Parakeet (?):

Smarsh the Hedgehog (For WolfeDente)

The paper is a little thin, so you can kind of see other drawings through it.

Paintings

I don't really paint much, honestly. These are for a realistic/impressionist project in my Fine Art class.
Also, I accidentally made the rim of the second one larger than it's supposed to be.

I also have a deviantart. Though I don't actually update it very often. Just in case, you know, you wanted to know. Plus, it has some stuff on it that I haven't posted here.

References:

Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:37:42 pm

Digital

Pixel Art/Sprites

Works-in-progress:

Stuff:

(The snowball isn't mine. :p) I made this when I named one of my snowballs Henry and then accidentally threw him. xD

Bows:

Stuff for a friend:

Stuff for Suki:

Stuff for Lex:

Presents/Boxes/Money Bag for ShadowedFortune:

Little animals for Nightshayde:

Smarsh for WolfeDente:

Entries for AlphaWolf's contest:

Other Digital

Yeah..I made that with a mouse while having no idea what I was doing.. :derp:

I don't really do much normal digital art, besides using Inkscape.

Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:38:05 pm

Critique:
So I can look over it when I want without searching for it. ^_^

Cassowary: Apple: Looks decent. Leaf should be connected to the base, though. The apple is also slightly too shiny (mostly just an opinion) and the side lightsource looks a bit odd - something coming more from the top would look more natural.
SilverTabbyCat: Jecca, were you trying to go for a catoony look for that cat, or for realism?
Jeccakat: Silver: Catoony/Cutesy
Cassowary: Flowers: Can't say much without knowing what they look like in real life, but you'll probably want to separate the petals/draw them as distinct, separate petals; make the stems thinner; and make the flower petals and the leaves a bit less fleshy-looking.
Cassowary: Kitty: Not good with cartoony things.
SilverTabbyCat: Ah ok, well I think the shoulder should be a little higher and the cheeks should be a little more pointed
Cassowary: Rubber duck: looks fine.
SilverTabbyCat: And you might want to define the paws a little better, let the actual toes show instead of just being an oval
SilverTabbyCat: Other than that, the shading and anatomy are very nice
Cassowary: Pixel: decent grasp of spriting. Don't have much to crit at the moment.
SilverTabbyCat: As for the paintings, try and smooth out the lighting more, and make the top flatter
SilverTabbyCat: I can't tell whether I'm looking at it from the top or the side
SilverTabbyCat: The contrast is nice though
SilverTabbyCat: The first one is nice

Creatures · by **Kiarys** » April 12th, 2012, 7:38:43 pm

I can haz post! :evil:

I love you, and I love your art, and it is eeepiic. :crazy:

Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:40:35 pm

You're a fast little cookie.

I love you too and thank you.

Creatures · by **Kiarys** » April 12th, 2012, 7:42:20 pm

Jeccakat wrote:You're a fast little cookie.

I love you too and thank you.

Of cuz I am. :yey:

Also, quick question: Can I try pixeling that rubber duckie using your drawing? :italian:

Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:43:53 pm

I'm going to make a sprite of it eventually. Go ahead, though! I would love to see how it would come out.

Creatures · by **Kiarys** » April 12th, 2012, 7:44:36 pm

Jeccakat wrote:XD

I'm going to make a sprite of it eventually. Go ahead, though! I would love to see how it would come out.

Yeah? Okay! *bounces off*

Also, I haz still to make your flower. :derp:

Creatures · by **Jeccakat** » April 12th, 2012, 7:46:43 pm

Take your time.

Creatures · by **anatomicallycorrect** » April 23rd, 2012, 7:12:37 pm

Hello

I will critique, being an artist myself. Your shading in the pencil work is quite well done, first off. The shading on the cat and duck are the best out of the drawings. Your pencil work is good but you may want to try easing up on your lines since they seem rather hard. As for your paint work, you could use some practice for sure, but if you keep up with it you can surely be quite good. I will not speak on digital art since I have never worked in that area. Overall you have potential so keep it up! :wave:

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