Hello Munin, I was wondering if I could get your help with something. I know it's only a sketch, but I'd really like to make sure that the anatomy is as good as it's going to get before I do the lines.
I've already tweeked and moved somethings around, so I'm not being lazy by handing off this job to someone else.
I'd like like a second opinion from someone who knows what they are doing. If you like you can explain or just red-line anything you think looks awkward.
Thank you!
If it's too small I can upload the full size version.
Edit-Oh, and this is more so for shape and anatomy, don't worry about the feather on the wings, I got those covered...unless you feel you need to point something out.
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Re: Munin´s art - free help/critique (please read first post
That bird looks quite awesome so far! The only thing that I am not so sure about is the legs, I don´t think the legs of birds of prey are quite that muscular and I´d have expected them to connecto the the body a bit lower, making the body longer.
These images show better than I can explain I think:
http://www.birdsgallery.net/gallery/bal ... agle_2.jpg
http://www.firstpeople.us/pictures/eagl ... 24x768.jpg
As your bird has its legs closer to the body the muscular legs might actually be right though, I´d still lengthen the body a bit though.
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Finished (?) ML1201´s sprite. That was a lot harder to do than I would have expected, I hope you like the result:
Please let me know if you want anything changed
These images show better than I can explain I think:
http://www.birdsgallery.net/gallery/bal ... agle_2.jpg
http://www.firstpeople.us/pictures/eagl ... 24x768.jpg
As your bird has its legs closer to the body the muscular legs might actually be right though, I´d still lengthen the body a bit though.
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Finished (?) ML1201´s sprite. That was a lot harder to do than I would have expected, I hope you like the result:
Please let me know if you want anything changed
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Munin wrote:That bird looks quite awesome so far! The only thing that I am not so sure about is the legs, I don´t think the legs of birds of prey are quite that muscular and I´d have expected them to connecto the the body a bit lower, making the body longer.
These images show better than I can explain I think:
http://www.birdsgallery.net/gallery/bal ... agle_2.jpg
http://www.firstpeople.us/pictures/eagl ... 24x768.jpg
As your bird has its legs closer to the body the muscular legs might actually be right though, I´d still lengthen the body a bit though.
I'll use those refs you provided me with and fix it up( Lol. *Pokes the first ref* Derpy eagle).Thanks for replying so quickly!
Re: Munin´s art - free help/critique (please read first post
That's such a pretty sprite! I love how you did the tail.
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OMG! O_O Munin, that is epic! I love it! I'm going to put it in my siggy now!Munin wrote: Finished (?) ML1201´s sprite. That was a lot harder to do than I would have expected, I hope you like the result:
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Wow, Munin! Just wanted to say that's a gorgeous sprite. :3
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Re: Munin´s art - free help/critique (please read first post
Hey munin its me again... I redid the lines of my horse like you said but i need help again.. maybe you can help with the neck ?