Fruit Bar Story Bazaar (CLOSED FOREVERRRRRR)

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2 stars (Why would anyone come here?)
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Fruit Bar Story Bazaar (CLOSED FOREVERRRRRR)

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You walk into the Tea House, getting ready to sit down to a wonderful afternoon of reading. You head towards your favorite story booth, but a shiny stand catches your eye. There is a colorful sign on top of it, written in playful bubble letters:
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Curious, you walk in. Inside, a bright, happy girl greets you. "Hello!" she says. Bouncy red hair surrounds a lightly freckled face. She wears a faded green apron with a white lace. "Welcome to the Fruit Bar!" She gestures toward rows of fruit placed in front of her in a colorful arrangement. "Have a seat anywhere you like." As you move to sit at the counter, a hummingbird flits up to you. It almost looks like a regular hummingbird, but it has ruby red chest feathers, dotted with black specks. Emerald feathers cover its body, and ivory primary feathers and stripes run down its sides.

Oh, I see youve met Nectar! The girl says. Shes our writer here. While you enjoy some fruit, why dont you order a story or two? It is the Tea House, after all. Each short story is free, for now. As if on cue, the hummingbird whisks out a scroll from under its feathers, and lets it unroll in front of you:

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 [b]Username:[/b]
[b]Subject of Story:[/b]
[b]Additional Details:[/b]
[b]Total Price:[/b]
[b]Other:[/b]
Intrigued, you take the scroll from its beak, and take out a pen. After writing down your order, you hand it back to the hummingbird, which was patiently hovering in the air. It zooms away.[/center]
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Examples and Rules

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You look around the shop once more, and notice a brightly colored billboard hanging on a wall. On it says Examples. You decide to take a look.
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Coming Soon!
RULES:
1. No stealing my work. You may post it elsewhere, but you MUST credit me.
2. Please, please, please only 2 orders at a time. I don't want to get over flooded with work.
3. Be kind and courteous. There is no Black List for now, but there will be if it is needed.
4. Put "Watermelon Juice" in your post if you read the rules, but in a sentence.
5. Please respect my writing. Critique is welcome, but please no "I hate this. Why do you even have a shop?".
6. If you really read the rules, do not put "Watermelon Juice" in your post. Instead, color your post FF8080.
7. Out of Order
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Credits

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Wandering back to your seat, you see a wonderfully adorned poster plastered on the wall. On it says Credits. You decide to take a look.
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Thank you Lazuli for the wonderful sprite of the Watermelon Hummingbird!
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Visit our other shops!

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As you turn to leave, belly full and a scroll of pinkish writing in your hand, the store owner intercepts you. Thank you for coming to the Fruit Bar! As you may know, we have many other shops as well. Here, have a brochure! She hands you a funky piece of paper, with orange and pink swirls.
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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar

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reserved





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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar

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The Story Bazaar is now Open!! Just so you know, the other shops in the banner do not exist yet. I will get to them shortly. :derp:





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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar

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bump :well:





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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar

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Bump~





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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar (OPEN! Free stories!)

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Bump!





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Re: Fruit Bar Story Bazaar (OPEN! Free stories!)

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Bump? Anyones?





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