Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

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Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby Enchanteddil » September 20th, 2011, 12:05:35 am

Hi and welcome to our 1st writing contest!

"Journey To The Unknown" is an RP that Nella wrote for my birthday giveaway where members were given a choice of 7 paths to choose from. According to the path they chose, we gifted creatures to make the journey successful. The RP and the paths were much praised by members that we decided to hold a writing contest. Nella will give the storyline, the paths and the rules of the contest in her post below. We sincerely hope you will have fun spinning a fine story based on her storyline and one of the paths you chose to write about.

The Prizes:
1st Prize - One pair of unnamed Gold Crystalwings
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2nd Prize - One pair of unnamed DoDo Birds
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3rd Prize - One pair of unnamed QB Red Rose Imps & One pair of unnamed QB Emerald Wyverns
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4th Prize - One pair of each and every creature from Remy's Inn & the Trading Post - all unnamed (ShopBorn)


Additional Prizes:
Every member who enters the contest correctly will receive a pair of creatures. They will be ShopBorn, ShopBred, Stream, QuestBred, GiftBred or Hybrids

Start Date: 20th September, 2011

End Date: 20th November 2011. This date will be extended only if necessary. But we prefer to end it on this date as we have another contest in the pipeline. 20th December 2011

Judging:
The judges will be NellaFantasia, Morgaln & ShaiNeko

Thank you everyone and enjoy the contest!
NellaFantasia & Enchanted
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby NellaFantasia » September 20th, 2011, 12:13:35 am

The Rules:

1. Each person may submit one piece of writing. Feel free to edit the story as many times as you want until the deadline date.

2. Please remember to break down the paragraphs. We don't want to be stuck trying to read a wall of text.

3. There's no limit to how long your story can be, but try to keep the length respectable. AKA no novel writing.

4. No collaborating. One story must have one author.

5. No chatting. If you have any questions, or would like to comment please do so in the Community Discussions thread. This thread is for entries only.

The Story

The Crystalline Caves were said to be a remarkable sight, clustered with crystals of various colors from blues to greens to reds, and sporadically placed all over the walls and floors of the deep passages so that one could venture into them without a light of their own. This is where you find yourself, carefully stepping over rocks and squeezing through tunnels.

It’s not long before you hear the echoes of gentle tapping. Upon rounding a bend, you find who you are looking for. A woman is beating at the surrounding crystals with a pick. She’s dressed in brown trousers, heavy boots, a loose tunic and leather jerkin with a multitude of a tiny bags and pockets wrapped around her waist and legs. Atop her head is a mass of curly brown hair. You clear your throat to gain her attention, and she stops in mid-swing to peer at you from behind large, circular goggles. She lifts them from her face and smiles.

You’ve heard of this woman from time to time in the Keep. Anita the Accumulator. Or, for those less inclined, Anita the Pack Rat. She often sends magi out into the world to collect samples of her discoveries, and in return she’ll award them with creatures. However, she is not what you expected.

“Hello, mage,” she says quite cheerfully. “Here for the journey, I wager?” You nod. “As I tell many of your folk, it’s not a pleasant journey if you’re not careful, but I give you creatures to help you with the trials. You keep them, too…long as you survive it in one piece.” You hesitate, staring at her warily with thoughts of whether or not this is a good idea after all.

She smiles wider and says, “Having a bit of fun, is all. You magi are so serious.” She wipes a handkerchief across her face, succeeding only smearing dirt. “It shouldn’t be so bad, and you get my little lovelies in the process. So,” she leans on the handle of the pick, smirking, “are you willing to go on the journey?”

Path A

“Ah, your journey will require you to seek things far and wide. To aid you I’ll give you an Etainian Quetzalcoatl who can soar through the sky and show you things you might not see.”


Path B

“You will be sent underground where the caves are enclosed. The Naureaun Quetzalcoatl will help you the most, for they can burrow small holes and reach depths you otherwise could not get to.”


Path C

“Seems your journey will lead you to a sweltering, hot place. For your companion I’ll give you a Hellhound, for no other creature’s powers thrive in such heat. Just remember to keep away from its temper.”

Path D

“The chilly caverns of the north will be your destination. For this quest I’ll give you an Icist, the kings and queens of the cold. Pack warmly.”


Path E

“Your journey will lead you to mysterious and unknown lands. Take the Crystalwing who can fly with great speed and take you across the world in the blink of an eye.”


Path F

“The frosty mountains await you, as does great danger. Not only will the White Elk lead you through the snow, but they have the power to bring peace to your soul.”

Path G

“While it seems your journey will lead you close to the Silva Forest, it is best if you take with you a Noctis Enox. No other creature will protect you so viciously. Take care when riding them.”


Choose which path you'd like to take and write about what occurs and how it ends. If you have any questions, please PM me. I look forward to reading each entry!

-- NellaFantasia


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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby Crazyflight » October 14th, 2011, 5:05:30 pm

Okay, here's the Crazy entree. It will be stinky, but I will try my best. :crazy:

Prologue by NellaFantasia (with edits of "I" instead of "you" and my response at the end):


Chapter One; The Flaming Gems


Chapter Two; The Moonlit Cavern
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby Merkwerkee » October 14th, 2011, 6:14:55 pm

warning: language

The end:


Beginning:



Coda


That's all she wrote.

Note: The story is in order of the spoilers. read the spoilers down the page and don't be put off by the words above the spoilers

PS I'm doing path F
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby noxnightstalker » October 14th, 2011, 7:29:51 pm

Path C

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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby elysium » October 17th, 2011, 2:49:29 am


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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby WhatNames » October 19th, 2011, 5:07:31 pm

Hmmm... Me thinks I'll do Path F...

...When I get inspiration. :yarly:
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby moondragon » October 24th, 2011, 5:32:58 pm

Oh, I want to enter. I think I'll do path C... *Runs off to come up with a plot*
Okay, I started it. It doesn't have a title yet though.

Move along, there's nothing to see here.
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby zozzy » October 26th, 2011, 6:17:44 pm

I will be doing it in NON-chronological order and then put it all together at the end so basicly until I edit this saying its good don't read, Saying as it will look like a crazy blurr and sluur of words.
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Re: Writing Contest - Journey To The Unknown

Postby BBkat » October 30th, 2011, 10:25:22 pm

I'm taking Path G! This should be fun. Finished! I hope it's not to long. I've split it into 3 parts to make reading easier.

Part 1


Part 2


Part 3
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