OUT NOW: Backflip Barry: ORIGINS (Ageti) NEW RELEASE

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OUT NOW: Backflip Barry: ORIGINS (Ageti) NEW RELEASE

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OUT NOW...the fan-flapping-tastic adventure of Backflip Barry, as he transforms the city of Ageti into a legend. No, a MYTH.
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The World's First Spa

Many moons ago, before backs could flip or kings could wing, there lived a male karcharos shark named Barry. He was a regular karcharos shark. But each day, he longed to be something more.

“What can I, a simple male karcharos shark, ever amount to?” wondered Barry aloud.

After many moments of contemplation, Barry decided to swim into town where he could express his woes in excessive detail to others. But suddenly, just as he approached the town he heard a noise from above.

*flap flap flap*

“Omg!” yelled Barry. “Whazzat??”

Barry and the other sea creatures looked up to the sky, and saw not one, not two, not three, not four, not five, not six, not seven, not eight, not nine, not ten, not eleven, not twelve, not thirteen, not fourteen, but FIFTEEN massive wings, flapping together in what appeared to be a horrifying amalgamation.

“What the hecky dizzle!?!” screamed someone to Barry’s left.

“Tell my tadpoles I love them!!” wailed another voice.

But Barry could only stare in amazement. Maybe this was what he was looking for all along. Maybe if he got closer he could become the male karcharos shark he always wanted to be. Barry followed the winged creature as it flew through the sky, until finally it landed on a small island.

“S-sup home slice…” asked Barry as he approached cautiously.

“What are you?” boomed the wings.

“I’m a male karcharos shark!” exclaimed Barry excitedly, for he was very proud of being a male karcharos shark.

“My name is *~King_Wing~*. That’s pronounced ‘King underscore Wing’ just so you know. But…why’d you like, follow me?”

Barry thought for a moment before answering. “Well, I want to do something cool with my life. I don’t want to be just any male karcharos shark. I want to be a famous male karcharos shark!! The very best, like no one ever was!”

*~King_Wing~* considered this for a moment when all of a sudden he had a brilliant idea. “Hey! I can help you do something great and be the best like no one ever was!”

“Really?!?!?!” gasped Barry.

“Yes. BUT. You must pass 3 trials. I call these trials ‘The Trials.’” explained *~King_Wing~*. “If you can complete them then I will help you with your goal.”

Barry swam back and forth, full of consternation. It was risky. He might die, or worse, be laughed at by the other karcharos sharks in his pod. But deep in his heart of hearts, he knew that this was his only chance. It was now or never. Barry took a deep breath, as his life flashed before his eyes rapidly. He saw his mother, Beatrice, and his father Bart shaking their heads in disappointment. He saw the other sharks at school laughing as he struggled to put on his gym fyns (gym wear for sharks), and last but not least he saw his one and only love, Ñéñá, as she turned away from him, never to be seen again. As Barry exhaled, a single tear slid from his left eye. He had made his choice.

“I accept.”

*~King_Wing~* flapped once. “Cool beans. So your first task is to bring me the skin of an invulnerable sea lion.”

“Pffft, that’s easy. LOL. I’ll be back in a jiffy!” chuckled Barry.

------1 day later-----

“Wtf where did all the invulnerable sea lions go ughhhh!!” moaned Barry as he passed the same anemone for the fourth time.

Just then he saw out of the corner of his eye a small mollusk. He swam closer.

“Hey.” Said Barry.

“Hey.” Said the mollusk.

Barry leaned closer. “Got any invulnerable sea lions in that shell of yours?”

“Nah m8.”

“Darn.” Barry flopped uselessly for a few moments when he was abruptly stopped by the mollusk.

“Pull yourself together, bimbo! I might not have any in my shell, but my bro from another hoe does!” And with that, the mollusk released a high pitched wail, not unlike a sad deer. The ocean swirled mysteriously and Barry had to squint to see clearly amongst the swirling water and ocean debris. Eventually he began to make out a figure. The figure got larger and larger and finaly, it stepped into the light. There, before Barry’s very eyes, was a massive mollusk. With sunglasses.

“Duuuuuuuuude.” Said the dude. “What uppppppppp?”

The original mollusk waddled over. “My friend here wants your invulnerable sea lion skin. You know, the one Flebly gave you last year for your half birthday.”

“Oh… yeah dude. No problemoooo amigo.”

Barry blinked. “Wait you’re Spanish?”

“Oui.” Boasted the Mollusk with sunglasses. Airhorns blared in the distance. “Let me see if I have the skin with me.”

The Mollusk with sunglasses rummaged around his shell for quite some time when finally he procured a rather disappointing looking limp skin. “Wey heyyyy there you go dude.”

“…K thanks.” Mumbled Barry.

-----One swim later-----

“Oh great *~King_Wing~*!! I have come bearing gifts. Well. One gift. Singular.”

*~King_Wing~* turned to face Barry, looking rather embarrassed as he pushed his wing straighteners out of Barry’s line of sight. “Oh…oh Barry. I wasn’t expecting you… hehe.”

“TADAAAAA!!” cried Barry, holding up the limp skin while completely oblivious to *~King_Wing~*’s predicament. “I present to you the skin of an invulnerable sea lion!!!”

*~King_Wing~* looked for a while. “oh, cool ok. Um, your next task will be even harder!! You must retrieve for me a fish eating seahorse!”

“HA! Childs play!” scoffed Barry.

-----One day later-----

“WHAT?!?” gasped Barry. “Ted moved AWAY????”

“Well…yeah. He missed his other seahorse friends up north. It’s kind of lonely down here.” Explained a petite seahorse. “Um, but here. I have a few addresses for some of his friends.”

Barry snatched the list of addresses irritably and swam off. The life of a male karcharos shark sure was hard.

291 N. Algae Ave. The first place on the list. Barry knocked on the door hesitantly.

“Hellooooooo?” whispered Barry nervously. “Anyone home?”

A meek looking seahorse swam forward slowly from behind the house. “Um…are you the tax collectors? If so, I already told you to go away!”

“Are you a fish eating seahorse?” questioned Barry, not waiting for an explanation.

“Yeah…I guess. But I’m a vegetarian.”

“Whatever, just come with me now!”

-----Another swim later-----

“Oh mighty *~King_Wing~*!! I have come to you with the fish eating seahorse!!”

*~King_Wing~* jumped in surprise and hastily shoved the can of ‘Wing Spray: More Than Just a Spray’ underneath his makeshift bed. “Oh hello. Wow, you did it! Yay….”

Barry puffed up his chest happily. “And the final task??”

*~King_Wing~* shifted uncomfortably, for he had not yet considered the third and final task. “Ummmmm…why don’t you…uh…you know what. Two tasks are fine. Don’t need more than two, ya know.”

“Awesome. So let's go do something great!! Let's make boring place called Ageti something to be proud of!”

*~King_Wing~* pondered his options for a moment when suddenly, a smile slowly spread from wing to wing. “I think I have just the idea.”

Barry leaned forward as *~King_Wing~* whispered his genius plan into his ear holes.

-----7 days later----

“Ladies and gentleman. I am proud to present to you the unveiling of the newest addition to Ageti.” Announced Barry excitedly. A small crowd of sea creatures had gathered around a huge sheet that covered the unknown creation of *~King_Wing~* and Barry. “I would first like to thank my family, my friends, and my ex girlfriend for inspiring me to create this masterpiece.”

*~King_Wing~* flapped above Barry, clutching a string that would pull the sheet, revealing the product of their grueling 7 days of labor.

Barry raised his fins. “I present to you…

*~King_Wing~* whipped the sheet off triumphantly.

“The first and only…SPA!!!!!!!”

Gasps of amazement filled the ocean as many more sea creatures swam closer to get a better look.

*~King_Wing~* lowered himself proudly as Barry swam back to allow the onlookers to see for themselves.

Barry was filled with so much happiness and joy that he felt he had to do something, anything, to express his excitement. As his excitement grew, his body, as if it had a mind of his own, began to tense. His back arched. Barry let out a 'weeeeeee' as he found himself aggressively backfipping through the water. "I DID IT! I'm....I'm...BACKFLIP BARRY!!!!!

*~King_Wing~* smiled proudly before turning back to the audience. “I officially name this building The Spa of Ageti….or as some might say….

….





The SPAgetti.”

The End.
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