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lunagillian wrote:
Further more for Voro manticore hatchling:

Their jaws seem to grow impossible wide for a split second,

Should be "Their jaws seems to grow impossibly wide for a split second,"

The change to impossibly is correct, however:

Changing "seem" would actually make it incorrect. Jaws is a plural word, and "seem" is used for plurals. "Seems" is used with singular forms.

When you go to one of the admin's creature pages, it comes up with the following message: "You would't want to spoil the surprise would you?" There should be a comma between surprise and would.

Also, in the chestnut kirin description, 2nd paragraph, 1st line, it says "In dark age, ..." It should be "In dark ages, ..."

In trades when clicking on frozen eggs to be placed into a trade it says "a mysterious and magical thingthing." The correct phrasing for this should be "a mysterious and magical thing."

KittyLune wrote:In trades when clicking on frozen eggs to be placed into a trade it says "a mysterious and magical thingthing." The correct phrasing for this should be "a mysterious and magical thing."

Actually, that's not frozen eggs, it's anything that's been placed in a hidden tab(or keep). The same thing happens if you hover over a pet on a lineage page that is hidden. And I think it says 'thingthing' on purpose.

The copyright info down at the very bottom needs updating; it's missing Jrap17 and Tekla in the "Art by..." section.

(not really a typo, but not sure where else to put it)

Lyria wrote: Also, in the chestnut kirin description, 2nd paragraph, 1st line, it says "In dark age, ..." It should be "In dark ages, ..."

It reads "In darker age, ..." on my kirins?
(Which would correct to "In darker ages, tales..." or possibly to "In a darker age, tales..." )

whoops double post sorry.

BBkat wrote:

KittyLune wrote:In trades when clicking on frozen eggs to be placed into a trade it says "a mysterious and magical thingthing." The correct phrasing for this should be "a mysterious and magical thing."

Actually, that's not frozen eggs, it's anything that's been placed in a hidden tab(or keep). The same thing happens if you hover over a pet on a lineage page that is hidden. And I think it says 'thingthing' on purpose.

I'm not sure if it really is supposed to be intentional. Has it been brought up before?

KittyLune wrote:

BBkat wrote:

KittyLune wrote:In trades when clicking on frozen eggs to be placed into a trade it says "a mysterious and magical thingthing." The correct phrasing for this should be "a mysterious and magical thing."

Actually, that's not frozen eggs, it's anything that's been placed in a hidden tab(or keep). The same thing happens if you hover over a pet on a lineage page that is hidden. And I think it says 'thingthing' on purpose.

I'm not sure if it really is supposed to be intentional. Has it been brought up before?

It's intentional.

"These animals must be properly trained since birth, ..." From the solar hippogryph description. It should be, "These animals must be properly trained from birth, ..." Since is not imperative.

Sapphire Kordaetis Elephant - Hatchling
"If left alone for two long, a bored hatchling will make a run for it,"

Should use the homophone "Too."