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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby Arospersonalguard » April 16th, 2012, 9:56 am

SeaCrest wrote:Aww, so cute <3

Thank you :3 <3
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday
Annoying boys who hurt me
With all the stupid things they do-and-say
I can't even remember
What I was so upset for
Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby gotw3 » May 2nd, 2012, 6:43 pm

OHMYGLOB I LOVE IT. CONTINUE. MOOOAAAR! Or I will nom you until you continue! *_*
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby Arospersonalguard » May 3rd, 2012, 8:21 pm

Dear lord, save me
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
Goodbye to heartbreak on my birthday
Annoying boys who hurt me
With all the stupid things they do-and-say
I can't even remember
What I was so upset for
Spun sugar melts in water an-y-way
I just wanna be SWE-E-ET
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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby CrimsonRegret » May 3rd, 2012, 9:41 pm

Oh no, no, no! >3 You writes moars, then thee shalt be saved :3 buahahahaha
AquaStorm wrote:Hey Crimson, hey Kink! I'm LightningDragon's cousin... she says that Kink's an awesome writer, and that Crimson's...er... unique


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Re: Promise?(Chapter 5) (Critic pwease?)(I won a contest)

Postby kadienryu » June 9th, 2012, 11:03 pm

wonderful. exellenye princi pecci
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Fighting, and blood I no longer care for. Replaced with gentleness, and caring, protecting, and defending, loving, and comforting. Those are what I feel now. No need left to fight there is save to defend her.
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